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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 6
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due THURSDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.
yoo cool lets do 10
Aight
won't be around tomorrow night, droppin now but no rush @KnowP
I tore your chick to shreds for NYE. put her in a hospital bed, son
This New Years Barbara aint the only Bush needing medical attention
The great father wrecked you. your battle was just merciless
Shit, if Dad beat you any harder i woulda called child protective services
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
Read through your drops on RB. They need to be destroyed fast
We're in desperate need of a Shredder... not just cause his voice actor passed
This faggot rides cock to get ahead in text. Poor kid has no hope
Ask anyone if they know a bigger dickrider than KP. They'll say "...Knowp"
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
I bag fine hoes. he’s a pretty boy who gets medi-pedi’s on time
Soo If my bitches aren’t atleast a dime, they cant be too far off from a Nine
Ya bars make me weak, but not in a good way, their all a fail
We use to have to stay up late for comedy, but im dropping early to view SNL
Gangster don’t describe you, ure swag screams its Beyonce
while you in the cypher playing hard ass, im tapping that on ya fit fiancé
u seem to be going backwards in the league, this lames the biggest loser
so when we hear Sharp taking a lunge for the Crown, its to drink himself to a stupor
I got KnowP Takin This one That Bag of Cereal line GNR fareal lol easily the LotB and Sharp u had a good drop too the CPS line was dope but it seems like lately e'rybody sayin Dadiator lines is played lol So I might be the only voter who liked it. But overall I can't lie...KnowP verse was mean sounded like he was bullying you bruh shit had me rollin "Mani-Pedi/Far Off from 9" & the SNL joint had me laughin too good shit man.
V-KP
I tore your chick to shreds for NYE. put her in a hospital bed, son
This New Years Barbara aint the only Bush needing medical attention
The great father wrecked you. your battle was just merciless
Shit, if Dad beat you any harder i woulda called child protective services
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
vs
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
Gangster don’t describe you, ure swag screams its Beyonce
while you in the cypher playing hard ass, im tapping that on ya fit fiancé
knowp ur bars was so close to being hard it was insane, like thats the most consistent i ever seen u come, but sharp ur opener was create and the the second line was a little used it was relevant cuz knowp lost to dadiator and ur third line was nice ur last two was horrid rofl but know man i dont know sometimes ur wording is a tad wierd like the "fit fiance" i thought was wierd even tho i quoted it, if the wording on that bar would of been right itd been lotb but the bush line had it for me
v/sharp
Opener, child protective
Vs.
Opener
This was another coo battle sharp opener was like that lol, child protective service was lol 2 which basically won it know opener was lls 2 just fell off with wording in the rest of the verse
V/ sharp
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
This faggot rides cock to get ahead in text. Poor kid has no hope
Ask anyone if they know a bigger dickrider than KP. They'll say "...Knowp"
Vs
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
I bag fine hoes. he’s a pretty boy who gets medi-pedi’s on time
Soo If my bitches aren’t atleast a dime, they cant be too far off from a Nine
Ya bars make me weak, but not in a good way, their all a fail
We use to have to stay up late for comedy, but im dropping early to view SNL
I got KP on this for sure.. His first line was lotb for me..shit cracked me up lmao.. His hits after that were pretty smooth and well executed. Sharp came with a couple of cool lines but felt could have done better with the dadiator personal..the line was too predictable in my eyes and played too.
Cool battle though
V.KP
I tore your chick to shreds for NYE. put her in a hospital bed, son
This New Years Barbara aint the only Bush needing medical attention
The great father wrecked you. your battle was just merciless
Shit, if Dad beat you any harder i woulda called child protective services
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
vs
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
v/ sharp
New years, child protective, sold out
Vs
Opener, fiance
V/sharp, close battle, but sharp was fresher, the dime shit I seen done on him an
I did an snl one him awhile back that hurt p verse but the bars I quote were cool.
Ceral jawn was lotb but sharp was more consistent he wins. Props yahll
Bush, Dad and KnowP/nope lines are all played to me. I did like the sold out bud and shredder lines though.
Know had heart of a tiger and hard ass. Crown is played, "view SN L" doesn't make sense grammatically the way he wanted it to, and I just wasn't feelin' the Nine play.
So yeah, it's really close. Comes down to who's 2 I liked better/trying to find minor things to nitpick at, which I don't really have time for ATM if I wanna vote on more than one battle. Lol
I'll come back to this one.
This was a pretty cool match up.
SharpNine - The Bush and Nope lines did very little for me. But you had a cool personal jab with the Dadiator reference, and two solid shots with the Shredder and Sold put bud concepts. Overall, solid verse. You got the punching down, but I would like to see your rhyme schemes tighten up a bit.
KnowP - This wasnt a bad verse, but I have seen alot better from you. The SNL line flopped for me, as I have seen (and used) a SNL concept used against against every person who's initials were S.N. (I used it against Sharon Needles,forexeample). That Dime/Nine flip was fresh as shit though. Props there. The ceral flip and crown lines were decent, but they lacked that viscousness. I wasnt feeling the hard ass line. I get pretty tired of the "Im fucking yo bitch" concepts; and honestly..They jave to be fresh as fuck to impress me nowadays.
This was close. Alot closer than I expected it to be. At the end of the day, I think SharpNine was a little more aggressive with his shots and edged this out by a cunt hair.
Vote Sharp Nine
I tore your chick to shreds for NYE. put her in a hospital bed, son
This New Years Barbara aint the only Bush needing medical attention
The great father wrecked you. your battle was just merciless
Shit, if Dad beat you any harder i woulda called child protective services
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
vs
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
I bag fine hoes. he’s a pretty boy who gets medi-pedi’s on time
Soo If my bitches aren’t atleast a dime, they cant be too far off from a Nine
Close battle. Both had some decent'ish but failed to execute on the concepts you guys had. IMO, Sharp takes it with just one more quotable. I would have quote the SNL bar, but SNL concepts are extremely played IMO and you worded it poorly as well. Decent battle tho, guys. Keep writing.
Vote - Sharp 9
Sharp
I tore your chick to shreds for NYE. put her in a hospital bed, son
This New Years Barbara aint the only Bush needing medical attention
ok humor factor not sure if this is a current event punch?? if so ok with the flip
The great father wrecked you. your battle was just merciless
Shit, if Dad beat you any harder i woulda called child protective services
haha good personal
your FL modding is sketchy. tryna make every battle swing in your favor
You sold out bud... without even working for Colorado's first weed retailer
this was a good personal reference would've had a better rhyme scheme in the setup though
Read through your drops on RB. They need to be destroyed fast
We're in desperate need of a Shredder... not just cause his voice actor passed
felt this punch didn't hit came off more statementish in my opinion
This faggot rides cock to get ahead in text. Poor kid has no hope
Ask anyone if they know a bigger dickrider than KP. They'll say "...Knowp"
nah
KnowP
U get ya ass kicked weekly, u need direction. Ask siri bro
Sharp has the heart of a tiger… and behind that is a plastic bag full of cereal
lol cool flip
I bag fine hoes. he’s a pretty boy who gets medi-pedi’s on time
Soo If my bitches aren’t atleast a dime, they cant be too far off from a Nine
this was worded more of a statement man
Ya bars make me weak, but not in a good way, their all a fail
We use to have to stay up late for comedy, but im dropping early to view SNL
ok good nameplay
Gangster don’t describe you, ure swag screams its Beyonce
while you in the cypher playing hard ass, im tapping that on ya fit fiancé
lmao nice flip
u seem to be going backwards in the league, this lames the biggest loser
so when we hear Sharp taking a lunge for the Crown, its to drink himself to a stupor
nah
SHarp Nine first 3 bars were good the last two fell off. KP good opener nice snl np flip and the hard ass flip had humor factor. I felt KnowP had it humor factor wise but Sharp outdid him with the personal flips. they were just a bit more creative for me.
V/Sharp