ya no the rules
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ya no the rules
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Ok stop listen shut the fuck up,When you notice the red beam on your fore head you'l duck//
You cluck like a fuckin chicken wen i enter a room,,Its gets all gloomy and intense im hell sent bringin doom//
As using my fingers on this keyboard the words appear on the screen,i am only 18 but an unstoppable rhyming machine//
My reputation on RB is about to be built,with all this lyrical blood being spilt//
my conscience clear i have an idea,copy and paste this lyric it will soon be a souvenier
listen son. I aint even gon' bother fuckin with you.
Kon's Shit stays sharp, Come at CT with the William Hung Approach,
.................................................. .................And Cut, Thro@t..
Kids comitting Incest, I'm the reason He wears Sunscreen, He Just,
.................................................. ......................Son, Strokes..
Punches Restricted, For The Gifted, I'll shit on U, Quick Kid..
.....................& have u "Dyin while on toilet" Like Big, did..
U Far From Hot, I cum wit Big Macks, U cum wit Mc,flurries?..
......Punches like Spectators askin "U...K?, like Ya sigs Blury..
Ct's Gettin Sonned...U'd think i was MJ, The Way I Rip Child..
Cursin Cuz ur given Incorrect Directions,
...................Is the only time U "SHOOT MISSE ISLE!:@:@..
No need to cum hard <--ur excuse after ur g is angry B!..
.........But Like The Bitch said, Kon's Larder then U'll Ever Be..
oh my goodness was that even 10 yo? i shuldnt of even dropped...uppin................................... ..............................................
i wrote it n took loads out 2 make it 10. it shud of been 10 bars not 10 lines............................................. .................................................. .............................................. lets have round 2 10 bars not 10 lines ight
ok weak battle. furtz at least you had a decent structure, and attempeted punches.
cut throat ya structure was awful, made half ya shit not even ryhyme, your punches were non exsistant.you both need to peep some LLL shit and try to learn how to throw a punch etc.
vote Furtz for the simple reason he attempted to diss his opponent.
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Uppin bruh........................
Nothing at all
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Kon's Shit stays sharp, Come at CT with the William Hung Approach,
.................................................. .................And Cut, Thro@t..
Kids comitting Incest, I'm the reason He wears Sunscreen, He Just,
.................................................. ......................Son, Strokes..
meh
v/FI
He at least had good structrure and attempted a punch. Cut throat you were weak man, you had no punche's and all around wack. Elevate. Also remove the / from your verse. Meh. Weak battle.
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yep weak battle barley n-e punches here both juss work on ya punches n flow n shit iight n try to drop harder i thought furzt would of dropped better but wut ev...Quote:
Originally Posted by kid sick.
vote//furzt
Cut, you had a poor verse. Played concept's and fillers. Punches were played, and extremly week. Work on making your structure solid. Furzt, Good verse. Concept's were decent, then again some were not. Structure was decent as well. You had a few filler's, but nothing that took away from your verse. My vote goes to Furzt.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=304443
uppin............
Kon's Shit stays sharp, Come at CT with the William Hung Approach,
.................................................. .................And Cut, Thro@t..
Kids comitting Incest, I'm the reason He wears Sunscreen, He Just,
.................................................. ......................Son, Strokes..
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nothing
vote-Kon for having pretty good punches and attempts,hope you get back into text cuz no joke i thought you were pretty good.