WK 9 Contenders: Kill Spree Vs MV - Spree Wins

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Buddy…
I load heavy artillery so your dropped on yuh block
I let the thing Hum, V… & your found dead full of shots off the top

heard you went moose hunting with the boys! ya wife knows that ain't right
came back with no moose, then had the nerve to tell her you ate all the meat on site

MV I See came with more of a comedic angle. You have to be careful with those because those have to shake the room a little bit to offset if somebody came right for your neck direct approach. I do like the punch. I have to go the opposite direction tho because Kill Spree, you came with a Nameplay that flexed into a decent Gunbar. MV's was a little bit funny but it gave me more of a generic feel of it coulda got said to anybody, (unless Spree really went moose hunting. if so then MV should win from making a good joke of that) So MVTG Kill Spree for making his bar more personalized towards MV up to this point.

Super close, had it tied after 1st read. Got Kill Spree scoring better on rhyming n wordplay & MV having a better angle based on real life afaik & making more sense throughout - the "shots off the top" works well in the humvee aspect but less so in the context of shooting someone or indeed letting the thing hum. Punch impact, lexical rhythm etc were all even so the deciding factor for me is the "shots off the top" part being a bit shaky resulting in MV edging it. Close as fuck.

Vote MV

Vote Spree

Clean jab vs inside joke-esque psuedo personal. For me, MV kind of whiffed here.

Buddy…
I load heavy artillery so your dropped on yuh block
I let the thing Hum, V… & your found dead full of shots off the top

at this point gun bars are most expected from Spree.. and with so-so wordplay

heard you went moose hunting with the boys! ya wife knows that ain't right
came back with no moose, then had the nerve to tell her you ate all the meat on site

i've never heard a moose hunting pun so props for the originality.. though the wording was off a little, this was a better pun than Spree's

vote MV

2-2 need more votes

Vote Kill spree. -_-

I'm with Phalanx clean jab. but a nice uppercut in the jaw. Had a nice punch line to confirm it too.

Mehhh This one is close to call Spree pretty basic to the point jab
Nothing special decent at best
MV had the comical approach going here I just don’t like how he used Moose twice
Imma lean slightly towards Spree for better wording and execution here

Vote - KS. In a close one

I think sprees punch was alright the word play worked but wasn’t that spectacular, mv came with a more comedic angle but came off a little cheesy to me but both punches were delivered well and is a close battle that comes to personal preference for me and I just didn’t find mvs too funny
V/spree

Spree had a solid concept but using a V nameplate on someone named MV is ridiculous

MVs was kindaaaa chuckle worthy but meh, and the one syllable multi and delivery left something to be desired


Vote KS