New Beats Added, Feedback please

i've had some free time cuz its summer so i made a couple of new beats... feedback is much appreciated...much more if u can give me advice on what to improve.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/makbeats_music.htm

Drunken Violent
http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2597508&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2597508&q=Hi

What!?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2585836&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2585836&q=Hi

You Don't Want It

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2439869&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2439869&q=Hi

Going Back

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2393247&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=2393247&q=Hi

hey man


Druken violent- ok this sounds alright. But when it comes you. You have wayyyyy to much shit happening. If your gonna compose you should take music theory lessons , or get a book. It would really help you out. Or you can just learn through experience i guess what ever works for you. But try not to have like 100 thousand different melodys all going at once that dont really complement each other. i cant really listen to the quality of this because i cant hear it on hi fi. so i cant give you feed on that

What- Ah , im not really feeling this. i cant help much with sampling. so uh ... work on it i guess . Sorry

You dont want it- Ok you have to much going on in this too . lol really. like.i think it has potential , but you have wayy to much shit going on in it. Just read as much as you can about writing and arranging music. It will help you. I promise you that.

Going Back- This is straight. I could see some one on it as underground shit. I dont dislike anything about this. That clap is a little sketchy it seems. But i dont have much of a problem with it.


Get back at my thread please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=206532