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song with a pop/rock band from around my area.
lemme know what u think.. this is a song for the ladies.. so if u trynna get that pussy wet.. put this jawnt on
its hot. Beat is ill but whoever singin is pitchy throw some autotune on the vocals.
uh naw im good on that... thanks anyway tho
uppin
Sing'n ain't bad at all. N youre right don't listen to dude's advice on that auto tune shit haha.
first verse is good, lyrics are cool, dug the emotion of it and the delivery fits the tone of the words well. good job.
second verse, i can hear the quality difference, but aside from that flow is cool, some unecessary pauses between words (probably due to syllable count bein off) but its very very minor, so no biggie. Lyrics are ight, so is delivery.
Above average collab, here. Good shit.
Stay up n return the favor.
good looks
zZzZ
singing = dope, haha, only thing is the mix on the vocals need some work on it, they are a lil low, and more stereo seperation....oh w8, the vocals sound alot better on the main part of hook, but the intro sounds a lil weird.
the 1st verse is dope, mix needs work, the delay isnt really a good choice, unless if its really low.
2nd voice, like the poster above said, u can hear a more of a quality difference. Other then that dope. I liked both of them.
all in general, i would prolly mixed the track better then it is, but thats the only complaint for me. good work man.
good lookin my man.. my verse is the poor quality 2nd one.. but im gettin a pro mix within a day or so
uppin
the arrangements in the song are good..... the singing is okayy.....
the instruments in the song are nicee..... musically its good.....
the verses could still use work...... i like the song but if you worked on perfecting the verses and some of the parts that need that little bit of extraa it would be fire
word good lookin
uppin.. i really liked this as a mainstream track