life starts with the sun

topical battle i did on another site

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...ongID=10664379


[soundclick]10664379[/soundclick]





feedlinks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...059/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...997/index.html

i like this beat....flow is good, delivery is pretty good, lyrics are really good....quality could use a lil more work....hooks good also.....nice shit man

Very nice beat real nice flow and vocabulary was on point hook was on point. Overall hot track man no complaints.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...026/index.html

feedback appreciated

alright i'll check both out momentarily

I agree that beat is very nice, rap too, like the flow and the voice.

From now on, please use the [.soundclick][./soundclick] tags(without the periods), and put the song ID in between. It's easier and it doesn't just automatically play. Fixed it for you, Thanks a bunch!