WK 3: Axe Vs Hush - Hush wins

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Axe @Hush

Hush’s Bar:

New casket for all of y’all .. I copped em
One punch a give accident on his head worst than when his mom dropped him

Confirming that is my bar

I been spiking the juice since 15 on these boards, so it ain't a surprise he savoring the punch
Can remember Hush on RB's menus getting cooked so bad, he 'coulda been flavor of the month

Accident good name flip

Spiking the juice weird, arby’s a good concept but I said it the other day myself so didn’t hit hard

Vote hush

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Originally Posted by Corleone mk 2

Accident good name flip

Spiking the juice weird, arby’s a good concept but I said it the other day myself so didn’t hit hard

Vote hush

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v/Hush

no one cares about the bar you said in your bathroom shower. I thought RB's menu was good. the only issue i had is the set up, it actually ended up throwing me off. wording is what decided this imo, even tho i preferred Axes concept.

MV shut up loser

shut me up zaddy

Axe a dent on his head was hard, Axe was decent & had a couple of things going on but I feel like if you need to have 2 lines as long as that to make the punch work there should be internal multis or something else to carry it through. Both nice still.

Vote Hush

This is a nice battle more of a preference if u ask me
I enjoyed hush bar alittle more he was slightly more harsher with the execution.

Vote - Hush

I want to vote Axe cause that was a very well-worded bar, the set up is airtight, it references RB history, solid rhyme scheme

But Hush’s wordplay outweighs Axe’s very solid structure/concept. Getting “cooked” is the crux of Axe’s punch, which is very light compared to Axe a dent. This was very, very close to me. Closer than the votes suggest. But axe a dent and solid everything else edges out cooked and great everything else.

Vote- Hush by a twat hair

Hush wins