WK2: Bahriman vs Lay Doubt (open 4 feedback)

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WK2

Punches due: Tuesday 26th August

Voting ends: Friday 29th August

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Bahriman @Lay Doubt

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No1 fucks w/ur bars! You can’t even topple weals
Women don’t hype Lady, & yall bars are the same quality

Damn can I still drop?

My username has a period at the end of it, so I never received a notification when this battle got created.

we're dropping the next round today, it's up to @Bahriman . My apologies for the shitty @

Oh fr? I thought voting ends tomorrow. Aight well ima key a quick one up just for fun. My fault. I’ll vote on shit too.

Peep his custom title.


You know why I’m here - an RB menace giving him 2 just 4 flinching
I find this self-proclaimed Beast Mode is the most common, hence his public Lynching

bahriman idk what a weal is and i know it doesn't rhyme with quality, i actually really did like your concept tho w the lay D w/p & the punch is funny, but i'm rather sure that doesn't rhyme..

lay came very simple here, but u key'd it so i won't say anything negative other than it was not very strong imo, punch is there but thats about it

v/ lay for rhyming but i truly did like bahrimans concept and if it somehow does rhyme then i guess im a retard

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Originally Posted by Blas

bahriman idk what a weal is and i know it doesn't rhyme with quality, i actually really did like your concept tho w the lay D w/p & the punch is funny, but i'm rather sure that doesn't rhyme..

lay came very simple here, but u key'd it so i won't say anything negative other than it was not very strong imo, punch is there but thats about it

v/ lay for rhyming but i truly did like bahrimans concept and if it somehow does rhyme then i guess im a retard

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Are you from the US?

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

Are you from the US?

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yea, what is a weal and how does it rhyme with quality

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Originally Posted by Blas

yea, what is a weal and how does it rhyme with quality

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Nah not about his bar lol but when you said mine was simple, I had thought I probably made it overly complex and convoluted with everything I tied into it. Thought maybe some of it got past you. My bad.

Well

We have bahriman who doesn’t know the mf engrish language

Vs

Lay doubt who wrote a bar in all italics that contains an approximate 0.00% of a punchline within it


Gee fellas idk about u but I feel like we alll lost this one

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Originally Posted by Blas

bahriman idk what a weal is and i know it doesn't rhyme with quality, i actually really did like your concept tho w the lay D w/p & the punch is funny, but i'm rather sure that doesn't rhyme..

lay came very simple here, but u key'd it so i won't say anything negative other than it was not very strong imo, punch is there but thats about it

v/ lay for rhyming but i truly did like bahrimans concept and if it somehow does rhyme then i guess im a retard

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Meant to say weaks not weal.

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Originally Posted by Bahriman

Meant to say weaks not weal.

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ah ok this is depressing bc i actually enjoyed your bar and that does rhyme.. would have edged it to u :(