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Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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@Exalted.
@daveDILLY
here
good luck
Ok. Posting
dave pays for intimacy. women eat up his wallet & heart
in Dilapidated stripper w/ mileage use him til he's broke n falling apart
if u collab or write with this loser - theres nothing good hes chalking..
in fact.......u'll find expenditure verse wrong - & the amount is shocking
I think both word plays here were a bit of a reach, dilly’s was slightly cleaner for me but didn’t like the way he ended his punch which took a bit off it for me
V/ex
Ex’s wordplay went right over my head
Got Dave edging this though. Play was kind of a reach but it worked enough
V/Dave
Imo Exalted took this convincingly. There had to of been a better way to execute the wordplay, at least in my perspective, that would be something I had to deliberate on back and forth. But you know what. I loved the way he did it. It took me 2 attempts to get where I could fully grasp how he was delivering it. Dave's was equally complicated in how he executed it, to the point where after 5-6 times of me trying to making it sound the way he wanted it to, I gave in. I just felt that it wasn't necessarily a reach, just a really complicated wordplay to pull off, and Exalted didn't take that much effort to get where he was taking it.
v-Exalted
lol this was a hard read, because it took me a while to sort of understand both wps. In this case I got exalted with a better execution imo. Dave's was a good attempt but I prefered exs wording
wasnt a fan of how either wordplay was utilized
after reading a few times i was able to kinda understand ex's easier, so for this reason he gets my vote
v/ Ex
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