Fuck Time

[FUBAR]

Time is my greatest enemie,
When doing my rhymes,
Or just tryin to kill time,
Those damn seconds get me,

I try to act all suavity,
But really, I'm just crazy,
There really is a lepricaun,
His name is lucky,

He'll fuck you up quick,
To where you'll get sick,
From sucking on his dick,
Or given him crazy licks,

Fuck time, it's not worth a dime,
Fuck time, can't even make my ryhmes,
Fuck time, why am I being confined?!
Fuck time, Because I hate time,

Time it self is a ticking box,
Ya just can't catch that fox,
he gets ya every time,
Like a damn K-9,

[FUBAR]

keep in mind I made this in only 5 minutes....so be warned it is very weird....lol

Heres a link....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122919

[FUBAR]

any one? This is a freestyle ,also;

[FUBAR]

some one?

[Ace of Aces]

good flow and content.

thats about it. props.

[lunatic]

funny and improving u just keep getting better like the structure

[f-gee]

this was strange and pretty crap to be honest
the whole scheme was poor even for a 5 minute job
half of it didnt rhyme

that shit about licking a leprechauns dick was fuckin wack....wtf was that about
i feel like ive wasted my time just replying to this..seriously

[lunatic]

Damn don't be to hard on him come on he's new he just started but I agree to a point to the scheme but I bet he could improve on it come on fubar I know u could do better just take ur time