Hard Times (Peep goin to be on audio, so please peep)

[LoCo]

been awhile since ive wrote on here..
well this is going to be on an upcoming album
the track is called "Hard Times"
just a "demo verse" or what you want to call it..
not for sure if its the write one, but I think its ok..
get the links lata...

Hard times, its daily, but cant alinate me
parents failed me, so Im experinced in variable dream's
delerious, as I trim my sterotype seem's...
jaws bein split, fearless, as I cross the streets
broken inside, wishin to die, as my demise
cries, wishin to be unbroken, but cracked in all the lies
my vision, is to be in a peacful sylilique, without hard times
bleeding, forever, no bandage to tape unto me...
taking advantage, of the murderous narcotics, with no demise
I supervise, the rantage of addictive products, that turn sky's
black and pale, with no emotion or optics...
This is what happens to a person, who trys to put hard times
in a deversion.., slowly becomin cold hearted... but
never learnin:
*pause*
That once it get worse, it doesnt cease..
so if you want peace, never get started..

[Ironik]

ayo man im feelin this... kinda hard to keep the flow goin on some spots but thats where u come in lol...

broken inside, wishin to die, as my demise
cries, wishin to be unbroken, but cracked in all the lies
my vision, is to be in a peacful sylilique, without hard times
bleeding, forever, no bandage to tape unto me...
taking advantage, of the murderous narcotics, with no demise

that part stood out the most... nice verse man, wheres the rest of it?

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Lazarus X]

the words you used was solid, but it was hard for me to understand what you was tryin to say:
cries, wishin to be unbroken, but cracked in all the lies
my vision, is to be in a peacful sylilique, without hard times
i dont understand that at all. i mean it sounds like your saying you dream about being in peaceful poetic type lifestyle where everything sounds like it came out of a poem or something man..... im just having trouble interpereting this. post a reply and help me out peace