12-16 bars
bars:
lallaalalalalla=1
lalalalalaalal=2
Votes:
no friend votes, d rdin votes, and no bying votes
Young Manny
'Young Cell'
12-16 bars
bars:
lallaalalalalla=1
lalalalalaalal=2
Votes:
no friend votes, d rdin votes, and no bying votes
check 1,2
This dude get killed over a bag of chips
Come to Cali you'll get stabbed by crips
We have street fights I'll jab ya lips
I'll get my Glock and then grab the clip
Young Manny gansta I load guages
check my file for recent road rages
I ride around town wit 2 fat glocks
Bitches sweatin me like Shaq's socks
I flow hot like magma n lava
I'm wild you'll think I live off java
You fuckin up yo team like Slava(Medvadenko)
Young Cell there aint no way you hotter
Did you ever stop to think I can be your father
That's why you mama want a trial for court
Cause Young Manny don't pay no child support
I'll make every thing located near yo chest stop
I'll fuck you up it's written all over yo desktop
V. Intercourse
U Ready......
wow the best of Young's??? stop this lame is haten fast
your maintainin trash, im hot...you should bet im flammin fast
you don’t win any battle.... quit rap this should be your lamest task
its happening like last time (VOTES) 0 an 5 like this years graduation class//
your makin bands, you get disabled to see checks
Manny fresh your tracks are trash...its no need for RESPECT
the leads yet to come for the guy im trying to beat next
so I quit the games..im not playing like the mentally disabled at recess//
what you seen next, is the Young Cell wit hands like a fighterman
your a tired man...that’s going flat like a tire stand
i bet you copy in paste, quit that shit...and be a writerman
you will never make a career...you stay on the web more then Spiderman//
chill out...stop cause your a goddamn liar
some please get this man fired, he want me to stand by him
but its ok cause this mans tryin...but if you win its like fan flyers
i should copy right cause he probably bite more then vampires//
young manny yu got merked but i cant vote it will be a hate vote :/
wat a dippo 12-16 bars is 24-32 lines lol
Votes come in this needs to be voted on so please vote
V. Intercourse
hahah why you cant vote homie what yall go beef or something man.....its cool tho thanks for your imput
OK HERES THA REVIEW:
This dude get killed over a bag of chips
Come to Cali you'll get stabbed by crips
BELOW AVERAGE
We have street fights I'll jab ya lips
I'll get my Glock and then grab the clip
G-TALK...
Young Manny gansta I load guages
check my file for recent road rages
WEAK
I ride around town wit 2 fat glocks
Bitches sweatin me like Shaq's socks
SOUNDS FAMILIAR
I flow hot like magma n lava
I'm wild you'll think I live off java
COMIN OUTTA NOWHERE
You fuckin up yo team like Slava(Medvadenko)
Young Cell there aint no way you hotter
Did you ever stop to think I can be your father
OK OK COMIN UP
That's why you mama want a trial for court
Cause Young Manny don't pay no child support
HA..
I'll make every thing located near yo chest stop
I'll fuck you up it's written all over yo desktop
GOOD FINISH
VS
wow the best of Young's??? stop this lame is haten fast
your maintainin trash, im hot...you should bet im flammin fast
MEH...
you don’t win any battle.... quit rap this should be your lamest task
its happening like last time (VOTES) 0 an 5 like this years graduation class//
AHAHAAAA
your makin bands, you get disabled to see checks
Manny fresh your tracks are trash...its no need for RESPECT
OK
the leads yet to come for the guy im trying to beat next
so I quit the games..im not playing like the mentally disabled at recess//
OOOOOOO
what you seen next, is the Young Cell wit hands like a fighterman
your a tired man...that’s going flat like a tire stand
OK
i bet you copy in paste, quit that shit...and be a writerman
you will never make a career...you stay on the web more then Spiderman//
OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo
chill out...stop cause your a goddamn liar
some please get this man fired, he want me to stand by him
but its ok cause this mans tryin...but if you win its like fan flyers
i should copy right cause he probably bite more then vampires
danm!!
V\Cell buz his hits were WAY harder and he had good metas!! Manny you slippin.
remember...chek out my sig cuz a brotha needs help!!
uppin this battle for the first time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177291 <--hit dis up
young manny-
dont talk about the streets....thugs dont get on the internet and battle.... flow was ok, structure was simple <--not necissarily a bad thing....punches were a lil off....my favorite line was the finisher
young cell- i liked the flow, especially at the end....it came out like a flurry of punches..the graduation class line was pretty tough...all and all decent punches...felt yah verse a lot more
vote- young cell
hit tha link
aight heres the breakdown for this round...
imma break out a points system...
young manny...
This dude get killed over a bag of chips
Come to Cali you'll get stabbed by crips
1/5
We have street fights I'll jab ya lips
I'll get my Glock and then grab the clip
1/5
Young Manny gansta I load guages
check my file for recent road rages
1/5
I ride around town wit 2 fat glocks
Bitches sweatin me like Shaq's socks
2/5
I flow hot like magma n lava
I'm wild you'll think I live off java
You fuckin up yo team like Slava(Medvadenk
1/5
Young Cell there aint no way you hotter
Did you ever stop to think I can be your father
1/5
That's why you mama want a trial for court
Cause Young Manny don't pay no child support
3/5
I'll make every thing located near yo chest stop
I'll fuck you up it's written all over yo desktop
2/5
overall a pretty weak verse because you had very lil punching goin on and no wordplay no personals a rocky flow bad structure and some played lines mixed wit lame lines and fillers sorry man this aint as good as some of your others
total score:12/40
young cell...
wow the best of Young's??? stop this lame is haten fast
your maintainin trash, im hot...you should bet im flammin fast
2/5
you don’t win any battle.... quit rap this should be your lamest task
its happening like last time (VOTES) 0 an 5 like this years graduation class//
3/5
your makin bands, you get disabled to see checks
Manny fresh your tracks are trash...its no need for RESPECT
2/5
the leads yet to come for the guy im trying to beat next
so I quit the games..im not playing like the mentally disabled at recess//
4/5
what you seen next, is the Young Cell wit hands like a fighterman
your a tired man...that’s going flat like a tire stand
1/5
i bet you copy in paste, quit that shit...and be a writerman
you will never make a career...you stay on the web more then Spiderman//
3/5
chill out...stop cause your a goddamn liar
some please get this man fired, he want me to stand by him
1/5
but its ok cause this mans tryin...but if you win its like fan flyers
i should copy right cause he probably bite more then vampires//
3/5
overall this was a pretty tight verse had a lil bit of wordplay some personals and came pretty regularly wit punches vocab was kinda weak and structure sucked at the end you also lacked a signifigant number of multis
total score:19/40
vote/young cell
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This dude get killed over a bag of chips
Come to Cali you'll get stabbed by crips
Noooooo
We have street fights I'll jab ya lips
I'll get my Glock and then grab the clip
nah g-talk
Young Manny gansta I load guages
check my file for recent road rages
weak
I ride around town wit 2 fat glocks
Bitches sweatin me like Shaq's socks
G-talk..self glory
I flow hot like magma n lava
I'm wild you'll think I live off java
wft...self glory
You fuckin up yo team like Slava(Medvadenko)
Young Cell there aint no way you hotter
Did you ever stop to think I can be your father
um ok
That's why you mama want a trial for court
Cause Young Manny don't pay no child support
hahaha
I'll make every thing located near yo chest stop
I'll fuck you up it's written all over yo desktop
nice closer cudda bin better
VS
wow the best of Young's??? stop this lame is haten fast
your maintainin trash, im hot...you should bet im flammin fast
nah
you don’t win any battle.... quit rap this should be your lamest task
its happening like last time (VOTES) 0 an 5 like this years graduation class//
ha...nice..like it
your makin bands, you get disabled to see checks
Manny fresh your tracks are trash...its no need for RESPECT
ight
the leads yet to come for the guy im trying to beat next
so I quit the games..im not playing like the mentally disabled at recess//
decent
what you seen next, is the Young Cell wit hands like a fighterman
your a tired man...that’s going flat like a tire stand
ight
i bet you copy in paste, quit that shit...and be a writerman
you will never make a career...you stay on the web more then Spiderman//
decent
chill out...stop cause your a goddamn liar
some please get this man fired, he want me to stand by him
but its ok cause this mans tryin...but if you win its like fan flyers
i should copy right cause he probably bite more then vampires
ight not a bad closer
ima have to go with cell for atleast havin a few decent punches which landed.....
v/cell
hit up the battle btween me n pictureperfect2...ight pz
uppin votes need one more to win
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