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    This Is A Stickup

    start at the starting n take you through to the endin
    this is a true story aint no pretendin
    had my hand on the pump, aimed at anyone brave enough to jump
    "NOBODY BE A HERO, DONT TAKE NO CHANCES, ILL COUNT TO ZERO, BEFORE YOU'LL NEED SOME AMBULANCES!!!"
    beforehand we calculated and considered a strategy
    i'll smoke them if anyone back answers me
    so it was set and all arranged, if anyone got smart we'll leave them derranged
    that stayed in the back of our head, it was either that or we'd all end up in jail or dead
    hittin up the safe in the back, head to toes dressed in all black
    disable the guard, and tie-up the video and sound, is it just me or did i mean that the other way round?
    anyways smith and wesson to his head, aint no guessin to how this fool will wind up dead
    "EMPTY YA POCKETS N SHOW ME WAT U GOT, ITS YOUR CHOICE, DEAD OR TIED UP IN A KNOT"!!!
    gotta be careful and think safety first, gettin this money aint a want its a thirst
    ohh shit someone hit the alarm, thats the heroes fault people we meant no harm
    now everyone has to die, unless someone can tell me 63 plus 29 is without tellin no lie
    didnt think so, now say goodbye
    "PUT YA GUNS DOWN AND LEAVE THEM GROUNDED, THERES NO WAY OUT, WE HAVE THE WHOLE BANK SURROUNDED"!!!
    how the fuck did the police get here so fast, one of my guys is a snitch and i gotta think fast
    out of 6 people theres only 1 i trust, so chamber afta chamber i bust
    till i'm the only one standing, FUCK! there goes all that careful planning
    down the drain, should i suicide it or plead insane
    cos there aint no way i'm going to jail, no one i know has enough money for me to make bail
    ill put peanut butter up my ass, stick out my chest and stand tall
    ill drop my guns and lean up against the wall
    put on all my clothes backwards even my shoes, that way theres no way i can lose
    plan b - follow procedure and go to court, compliment the judge (gday sir u look so short)
    jeer u a genius, ahh me and my brain u shoulda seen us
    we work so well together, we came up with the plan which would keep us outta jail forever
    the modern day bonnie and clyde, gave myself up and hopped in the ride
    but not without being cross eyed and having a smile on my face, "hey brain, theres no way were gonna lose this case"
    (Later that day during a cavity search) theres fuckin peanut butter up his ass (ANOTHER ONE???)
    mr, we've seen this trick before, ur going straight to prison (DO NOT PASS GO), to be some1's jailhouse whore

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    some good lines and rhymes in there
    the lenght was great
    liked the ending it all fit togther
    the story behind it sounds intersting
    the chours really caught my eye thats some good shit

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    that was ill it sounded a lil like some songs eazy e wrote

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    yeh blood, eazy gave me the inspiration on 'Nobody Move'
    a hot song, i look up to that guy

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