Is commerce killing Hip-Hop?

[The Vortex]

Your dumb as shit... it didn't rhyme at that part because 'verses' does not rhyme with 'dusted' no matter how you say it.

And if it is a poetic rhyme scheme it belongs in the poetry section not the open mic section.

you moronic semian throwback
weither it rhymes or not in completion it has a similar sound so fits in place

ok so maybe it suits poetic scriptures better.. but often i get no replies at all there so this is the spot for me to drop it

so like it or hate it...w/e

[K9_THESHIT]

look here right...you mugs are giving the wrong advice to the wrong fucking person believe me sons

ive wrote thousands of verses in hundreds of different rhyme schemes
this is justb one i decided to post like this coz i was feeling it fuck if you aint
your opinion is just that

fuck a tutorial

thing is your probaly wack as hell and hardly post any verses...you mean nothing to me

lmfao...you thing you're so good?The only way you'll get any better is fi you listen to other's people advices and take them into count.The day you think you're too good,is the day you won't elevate anymore.

And read some of my OMs if you think i'm wack yo:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224170

[The Vortex]

look this is going into freeposting now son

have you read any other of my om's..probaly but you've now forgotten, so you now judge me on one piece of work.. i wrote in like 5-10 minutes


i dont take advice from people who spit with true hatred and arrogance

ill have a joint posted soon about the likes of you ..


fuck a tutorial

maybe ill read your post maybe not
maybe i read it already and diddnt reply.. only i know the truth