10 lines. Due Midnight...
Revelationz.
Crucial Times.
10 lines. Due Midnight...
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it's supposed to be 2morrow midnight.
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My bad...sorry I meant 2morrow Midnight. Ya know what I mean....neways g/l...
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Herb's In A State Of Birth Where Hanging Off Is What Maryland's Worth
I Can't Tell Which Part Of Your Revalation Is Worse...
.......the part that you have a sucky verse or the fact that your a herb
Must've Hurt...when your record stayed 2-1 backwards of a 1-2 punch
Opposites made you stumped...the lowest of growth out of the bunch
Thats Not A Hunch...
.........Putting Quotes In Your Verse Is The Only Thing Taken Personal
I've Heard It All...Thats Why When I Say You Suck I've Used Them All
I Flip Herbs Exposed As Flash Cards.....
......................................So Its No Wonder When You Step To Me
This Fag Dreams Of Coming So Hard....
...............................That He Blows Me Over In the Wettest Dream
Honestly I'm Sure That You Would.........But Thats ONLY If You Could
Thats Why It Came As A Suprise....
..............................When I Realized You Really Weren't That Good
Scytsophrenia
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........i'll drop a vote you need to come out of retired for good
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
lmao at you having 2 days to write THAT garbage
fuck outta here
CT hasn't been on RB in 2 months cuz he was owned, in case yall didn't notice
Seems like you been depressed forever, cuz u even got yo sig lookin hopeless
CT uses the same shitty lines, it's time for you to come up with somethin new
so Crucial looks to the SKY for help, only to find the concepts he already BLUE
Noone's a fan of u anymore, all of your battles here shouldn't even be allowed
Your only liked when u fail to drop a verse, n still manage to please the crowd
Bitch dont deserve recognition, he was bad months ago n' now he really stank
Of course I would give u credit, as soon as u stop getting robbed by the bank
CT's a weak fuck who was simply born retarded but he wanted to be a writer
I said he didn't match my verse, n' his excuse was that he only had a lighter
10 faggot.
lmao edit
Hasn't been on RB in 2 months cuz he was owned, case yall didn't notice
Seem like u been depressed forever, cuz u even got yo sig lookin hopeless
C uses the same shitty lines, it's time for u to come up with somethin new
so C looks to the SKY for help, only to find the concepts he already BLUE
Noone's a fan of u anymore, all of yo battles shouldn't even be allowed
U only liked when u fail to drop a verse, n still manage to please the crowd
He dont deserve recognition, he was bad months ago n' now he really stank
Of course I'd give u credit, as soon as u stop getting robbed by the bank
C's a weak fuck who was simply born retarded but he wanted to be a writer
I said he didn't match my verse, n' his excuse was that he only had a lighter
Wow at calling my verse garbage. Lmao u trying to sway holmez? tsk tsk. rofl wateva. watever decent verse Rev. could've been worded better but u got potential. Nice battle....Uppin 1 for votes.
Scytsophrenia
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your supposed to say that a person's verse is garbage or something bad, it's a BATTLE, lighten upOriginally Posted by Cornea
n' lmao. that's not swaying. Swaying is giving a reason of why you shouldn't vote on opponent's battle. Example : talking shit after a battle saying that a bar isn't true
and lmao at u acting like your better saying that I have potential
anyways.......rise 1
no hate, just making a point
rise 2
vote or die
Just playin with ya man....Its all good...Bump 2...
Scytsophrenia
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Cornea
Herb's In A State Of Birth Where Hanging Off Is What Maryland's Worth
I Can't Tell Which Part Of Your Revalation Is Worse...
.......the part that you have a sucky verse or the fact that your a herb
No
Must've Hurt...when your record stayed 2-1 backwards of a 1-2 punch
Opposites made you stumped...the lowest of growth out of the bunch
Thats Not A Hunch...
No
.........Putting Quotes In Your Verse Is The Only Thing Taken Personal
I've Heard It All...Thats Why When I Say You Suck I've Used Them All
I Flip Herbs Exposed As Flash Cards.....
No
......................................So Its No Wonder When You Step To Me
This Fag Dreams Of Coming So Hard....
...............................That He Blows Me Over In the Wettest Dream
No
Honestly I'm Sure That You Would.........But Thats ONLY If You Could
Thats Why It Came As A Suprise....
..............................When I Realized You Really Weren't That Good
No
Blah verse. Concept's were played an worded poorly. All your lines were forced. Im not a huge fan of that structure either. Work on your concept's an try to stay consistant.
v.
Revelationz
Hasn't been on RB in 2 months cuz he was owned, case yall didn't notice
Seem like u been depressed forever, cuz u even got yo sig lookin hopeless
Personal ,Meh
C uses the same shitty lines, it's time for u to come up with somethin new
so C looks to the SKY for help, only to find the concepts he already BLUE
Nice
Noone's a fan of u anymore, all of yo battles shouldn't even be allowed
U only liked when u fail to drop a verse, n still manage to please the crowd
Meh
He dont deserve recognition, he was bad months ago n' now he really stank
Of course I'd give u credit, as soon as u stop getting robbed by the bank
No
C's a weak fuck who was simply born retarded but he wanted to be a writer
I said he didn't match my verse, n' his excuse was that he only had a lighter
lmao
Good verse. I liked the concept's an the 2'nd bar was my favorite. The first bar was worded poorly. It' would have been a decent personal. Nice attempt though.
v/ Revealtionz for better concepts
-mc mystique
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
thanks for the vote
rise 3
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