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I know why your battlin me what you think I'm stupid G
your battlein me because you want your win to be easy
jsut so you can brag to the friends you got and say your good
I didn't know that always battling newbies was hood
the chance's of you bein comical aint even logical
I don't even think if you tried it would be possible
so i'm battlin to the death givin it my best shot
against all your fake fuckin rhymes that you think are hot
stop pretending like your gonna be the next tupac
at least he didn't die pretendin he was somthin he's not
Yeah hoe im vicious with punchlines – really hoe you have no sting
You aren’t wack okay, whatever yeah ok you are good – for nothing
Even wack heads merk you kid, so how the fuck you gunna win this
Your stuck in the stone age – even the dinosaurs shitted on you bitch
You aint elevating, your trapped with no where to go, your stuck hoe
Ur ratings through the roof – I aint know you JUMP that high though
You aren’t a gangster – fuck you – you don’t have any guns clappin
But your WHOLE life is a BIG person – al waiting to fuckin happen
This is WAY too easy – there is just no way that you can fuckin win
I gotta kick OUT of u – because I already kicked your fuckin face IN
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\/=Logical
Phantom your verse was to simple...very little wordplay at all...work on your concepts man and evrything it seems like you got basics to do a battle but your punches arent that directed to your opponent jus keep workin ya heard...Logical your drop was good you came a little bit more direct and wittier wit your punches which helped you get tha win...and wit tha concepts and flow and stuff you did enuff to get tha win so you get my vote
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