need to get this verse critiqued follow the link to the battle
im new to da game, a rapbattles virgin/
buh ima dissect you wit precision, like a surgeon./
no revision stayin true hard like cement/
hatred in my core, aggravation, my intent./
dissmemberment like da Final Destination./
series, bitch i own all four /
yo mammas final destination is my front door/
she beggd so long i gave my dick to make her hush/
get'n laid, get'n high, cuz we smoke that kush/
the name's Adrenalyn an' i am feeling the rush/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=421862
