Dedicated to Poetic Scriptures
Time to flip the script
We make it fit
It tears us inside
No one would dare call me the best
I simply stretched the boundaries
And if you don't know what I mean
Then I guess that just sucks for you
I aint reviewing anything
I continue with my awesome
Control the average and the mean
That's why I leave myself unseen
It started in two-triple-O
It crawled and slithered out my soul
The straight up darkness of Sheol
Letting me rock and to the roll
I make this up as I go down
The spiral of Leviathan
And no one caught me...
Bitches.
But...
....so they call me necromancer
But that was then and this is now
And it's still poetry to me
You can't step to my awesomeness
And y'all aint as alive as me
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I quite liked it in a catchy kind of way. It was written pretty well and the words rolled easily off the tongue. The topic and concept wasn't all that great but it had it's own unique charm that I can't quite put my finger on. The wording also fell off at a few parts. eg; 'And if you don't know what I mean Then I guess that just sucks for you.' You also capitalised all the first letters which didn't need doing and this piece lacks a lot of punctuation. lol Besides that it was strangely enjoyable. Keep writing.
