First attempt at recording anything. Flow is off. Figured I'd get it out anyways.
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First attempt at recording anything. Flow is off. Figured I'd get it out anyways.
Feedback:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...888/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...637/index.html
Actually Bē. Forgot to log out.
i like that ur confident enough put yourself out there..
u need to work on your voice.. n find your swag..
By swag i mean ur attitude and enthusiasm.. cuz u sound a little white bread typical forum rapper but I deff see potential...
THE MASTERS & THE MASSES, One Has P O W E R ; The Other One LACKS IT
Why don't you write yourself instead recording something of Apathy.
But anyways it ain't that bad for a first time i guess. Flow is isn't that good indeed but just keep it up!
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Not big Apathy but if you compare it you need a little emphasizing in your voice when you rap and memory of the verse so not to stop on the floor have anything you recorded
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thought it would have at least been ur own verse LOL, so....what am i supposed to feed you on? the fact that you can rap somebody elses shit? i mean, i cant comment on the flow because its not yours... i cant comment on the lyrics or beat.... so i guess i can just comment on your voice....umm yeah, its a bit plain....write your own verse and put some energy into it man
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beat sounds like something Ghostface Killah would rap on...but it sounds like it's playing through a television...so obviously, the quality is sub-par here...
Your actual flow isn't bad, but def. needs work and development...
from what I can hear, rhyming and lyrics are basic to slightly above average generally...but have no real focus or direction...I'd suggest picking a topic and rapping about it...
Keep elevating and dropping...you will def. improve.
RTF pls on "What dey been waitin 4"
Q DA GAWD
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