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Funnys My Name
Raps My Game
My raps hit so hard just by looking at em you get a black eye
Your a fake a phony, a rip off like dragon ball z CAI
Funnys My Name
Raps My Game
Lacks, wit, harshness and originality. Remember, you want to try and develop some type of witty concept and word/execute it harshly. Even thou the Dragon Ball Z concepts is really played, you could have done something witty with it or just scrapped it, IMO and try and do something more or better. For an example, USE his name against him with some type of wordplay/play on his name.Originally Posted by Zoshi
I see you tried to personal approach which IMO is the best approach for 1-2. I think you could have did more with the weak ammo quoted/provided. For an example, we all know Zoshi is very young, you could have used that or incorporate some type of witty concept along with the quote and executed it differently and/or a lot harsher.
Anyways, I feel CAI took this pretty easily, both PUNS were soft/basic, IMO but Cai's just had a better connection. Keep at it fellas, the more you battle, the easier it becomes (SOMETIMES).
v/Cai
Zoshi had a decent idea on a nameplay but the wording make it softer than roasted marshmellows
Cai had an amazing quote to work with but didnt use it to its full potential...
Ima have to go with the harsher less horribly worded punch
V/Cai
Zoshi's wording hinders him the most & he also needs to think outside of the box instead of being confined.
Cai you have been doing this for to long to have trouble with concepts, only thing that saved was the direction & wording other then that this was ass.
Cai- barely.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
zoshi used a played dragon ball z concept. cai used a personal that didnt land that hard but was more of a decent flip imo.
v. cai
V.Cai/zoshi's punch hit a tad bit harder. the dbz concept was little dry with no sting
...Onslaught!
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