I see the concept, but the wording/execution hindered it. I do enjoy your concepts, JOE but you are extremely wordy. I think if you were to actually take the time to word your concepts in a harsher manner, you'd do fine, bro.
Simple concept, worded/executed nicely. Have to say this bar takes the WIN, IMO. Direct personal and in MOST CASES depending on how harsh the personal is worded/executed it always has the upper hand.
Decent 1-2 face off here, gents.
v/KnowP