Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
See your a family man to heart so all that fight talk ain't no one scared of ya
One uppercut will make this kid nap you'd think they had wanted posters of me in Nigeria
I see the concept, but the wording/execution hindered it. I do enjoy your concepts, JOE but you are extremely wordy. I think if you were to actually take the time to word your concepts in a harsher manner, you'd do fine, bro.

Quote Originally Posted by KnowP View Post
if u champ VBL, the league would just laugh n boo
cuz U was soo afraid to face off with MAC, they should name makeup remover after you
Simple concept, worded/executed nicely. Have to say this bar takes the WIN, IMO. Direct personal and in MOST CASES depending on how harsh the personal is worded/executed it always has the upper hand.

Decent 1-2 face off here, gents.

v/KnowP