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Thread: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(DILLY WINS)

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    WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(DILLY WINS)



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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)

    check
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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)

    Ur wack, n thats an honest assessment coz u can’t write rhymes u just screw them
    The last time dilly came with solid bars was when his wife n kid were visiting through them

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)

    punches will cave ya head in - theyll have to get forensic 2 prove i killed again..
    but im not worried bout leaving identify have the police trying to do that 2ya skeleton

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    This was cool battle. The bars wordplay was done descent, but I thought it was a bit basic. I believe that the identify / forensic wordplay was a bit more technical in this battle. Both had good setup into the punch.

    Vote - daveDILLY

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Vote - Dilly

    I liked both bars. But I feel like Dave's was set up better and landed harder. Narrow edge. Respect to both.

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Liked both tbh but I think I’m going to edge this to Slayerr for the personal play. Close battle good shit

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    2-1 dilly

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    yeah i'd say slayerr also/// dill's pun didnt connect as well

    both could be better

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    The very end of Slay's bar gave me a lite chuckle but even tho Dilly's wording seemed a little weirder, I gotta admit...I like the violent visual nature of his bar a little bit more. MVGT Dave
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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Slayer - Yours was clean and easy. No thematic unity between the first and second lines, so it didn't read as clever as Dilly. I enjoyed the humor with the 'bars' line.
    Dilly - This was good, but wasn't neatly executed. Your meaning was obscure to me, though I could tell there were clever ideas you were weaving together with the skeletal/ head in/ forensics checking bones idea. I wasn't sure if you meant 'identity' or 'identify'. Maybe its me.

    In the end I thought Slayer edged it on the fact that it communicated better, though it was more basic.

    v/Slayer.

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    This is tough both Punchlines well done
    Both creative

    I felt like Dave a more Creative compare to Slayer

    Vote-Dave

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Yeah Dave’s could have been worded better, I don’t think ‘identify’ is really a common abbreviation of ‘identification’. That said, the wordplay element seemed original. I thought Slayerr wasn’t up to his usual standard this time, it was a bit bland. On balance I prefer Dave’s bar.

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    5-3 dilly let’s close this shit up and move on

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    Re: WK21: daveDILLY (2-4) vs Slayerr. (3-7)(OPEN FOR VOTES)

    dave wins

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