One Homie

[BoznianMc]

One Homie

One homie 2 homie 3 homies
which ones true i tell u who
NONE OF EM they all jus holdin me back
when some of em hear this track
theyll kno wht im tlkin aboutt
theyll kno why im saying this shit
is all for a reason non of it is good
but what can i do about it i try my hard to be
true about it but it still not good enough
in this world there usually is no true homiez
theyll talk to your girl try to get with em
when they hear somethin bad bout u they gon
act like they care listen to this here
you dont give a fuck is not much to me
but when you see mee ill give u a third degree
death most of these mothafuckaz don belive me
haa haa

Got no homie as sho as hell i don want one
i don need one im betta on my own
doin my own shit writtin my own rhymez
fightin my battless by myself
thas how i gett betta at it
so go ahead tell me ur my homie
soon enough u wont even kno my name


I cant tell you to be true if u can do wht u need to do
ill do it i don need no help
ive been doin my own shit my whole life
shits gettin worse im tryin not to burst
but tha more u keep singin tha more i hear cakijas bells
ringin so u go and tell me ima be there for u
mothafucka ima bare to see if im there for youu
u tell me u got my back no matter wht kind of situation
but i got tha concentration so u don need to watch anythin
cus ud be better off anyways anyhow
get outta my way i gotta go look for someone loyal
nothin special nothin royal jus someone someone
tell me who it is tell me who is gonna be
if i gotta keep on hearin roomers trust me ima go fuckin crazy
most of them jus wanna say somethin jus wanan strt somthin
soon u gon act like u don nothin
and now im poppin off and im seein u runnin

Got no homie as sho as hell i don want one
i don need one im betta on my own
doin my own shit writtin my own rhymez
fightin my battless by myself
thas ho i get betta at it
so go ahead tell me ur my homie
soon enough u wont even kno my name


I wrote dis shit when i was 9 years old and right know am 16 years old.. feedback please.. one luve and please visit dis link there is a lot of my songs that i made www.soundclick.com/krazybosnianklan << And am originally from Stl aka Stluis Southside.. pys

[Lock-Down]

i wasnt feelin it better luck next time aight homie

[OnKor]

Didn't Feel It At All, Work At It. More Complex, Witty, Add Multis etc

[KLean KuTz]

u just need to draw the crowd in with a freestyle u aint really fo that....
flow was off at times... no punches.... no multis....wasnt even complex...
but that was when u were 9 years old so i guess this doesnt really matter

[BoznianMc]

it doenst reeallly matter check my songs dawg and u gone hear it man..

[Lock-Down]

yo better luck next time son u need these feed backs in order for u to get better aight homie

[EyeBite]

HAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, this was not good AT ALL!, you need to work one verything, i wasnt feelin this wut so ever, you need to quit with not ending 2 lines with rhymes

example:
yo, this dude doesnt even know what to do
not a lot of people know what to do, unlike you
(that might suck btut its an example)
^like that, end 2 lines with the same rhymes, that could make it better but not really bring it back to life, flow and strucutre were off all the way, everything wasnt even complex or enjoyable to read at all, bad drop, elevate and peace