Topic is played, i feel like you could have came with a better flow because if you're emceeing this or if you plan to do real music....You must make sure everybody know what you're saying unless you're music is made for the right audience....Thanks for listening!
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LOL...this is the only part I actually understood in that paragraph....even still....you didn't tell me how you propose I make the flow "better".i feel like you could have came with a better flow
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As others I felt the emotion in this one, and that what makes a piece good, and your vocabulary was straight fire. It had a somewhat horrorcore taste to it, and I am indeed fond of that characteristic. Keep dropping, that stuff was nice.
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you had a nice flow going with nice structure good imagery nice wordplay man i didnt understand some of the words so thats about the only thing i didnt like but other than that great verse 8/10 keep up the good work
Thanks for peepin...and most importantly ... thanks for the constructive crit.
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