staying alive I oblige in death

[distinct]

learning the lesson that the sucession of your profession
is a blessing but now its regressing to trembling hands
unecessary wars deadly commands I can no longer ignore
but understand to overcome for my life is done
with my words used like some would use a gun till kingdom come
to live and be able to survive and not have to run
staying alive I oblige in death not to arive tonight
kunive to fight deep breaths cuz life just might
give rest to the stress wanting more recvieving less
no sucess in death no wealth no health
"I wake up in the morning and I ask myself
is life worth living should I blast myself"*
I no longer know where I go from hear death seems to ring in my ear
nothing seems clear for me to pursue what do I do
heaven sent hell bound smoking a blunt drinking a brew
who knew this is what these words would amount to
last man standing of all the homies left
just wanna kick it again so staying alive I oblige in death

Distinct - Peace
tell me what you think




*quote from tupac "Heaven got a ghetto"

[Obscene six-17]

Shit is raw you got some skill...9/10 drop so more

[distinct]

thnx for feedback uppin for more replys good or bad tell me what you think
uppin

[Ether Spitter]

on a real tip...i thought this was distinct in itself....the beginning was kinda sketchy and had an 'already been done' vibe in it...tho : give rest to the stress wanting more recvieving less
no sucess in death no wealth no health
"I wake up in the morning and I ask myself
is life worth living should I blast myself"*
...the quote wasnt bad for a twist....overall i felt that this piece was pretty straight....elevate dunn


Igido

[DeepNess07]

Damn, that was pretty hot!! I agree, drop some more!! The use of the same rhyme is pretty difficult and frustating to do, but you got on that like a pro. Keep up the good work!