A Son With No Father feat. Gifted Signs(a Insane Lyrics Crew Collab)

[HawkEyes]

Gifted Signs Verse:
A baby growing up with only half the life
also a mother always saying she'll use the knife
many things get infected by not having a father
like never have a full blooded younger brother
always roaming around look for that father figure
smoking weed and getting drunk off that malt liquor
Mad at the world and walking around with guns
getting high and popping off shoots just for fun
doing all types of fucked up things...not giving a fuck
until that one day he gets caught up with no more luck
thrown in jail for 6 months without no bail
just waiting for the day he gets out of jail
tries he's life one more time on the wild streets
he gets gun down and theres nothing left to see but white sheets
As people walked on and didn't care or even bother
look at him it started with a son with no father


HawkEyes Verse:
A son with no father walks around depressed
livin life as a thug and gangsta nothin less
pissed off cause all the pain that built up
doing different crimes but mainly the stick up
Smater then others so he proceed with caution
and also says to himself what if his mother had a abortion
now finds himself as one of the top gangsters
so he thinks if he proves himslef that he is not a facker
Shootin, robbin, and beatin up many niggas
feels he's the big man on campus pulling tha triggas
has no love for no one not even his mother
Screamin at the world saying "Fuck My Father"
he fucked up and pulled on the wrong guy
the man popped him and left him to die
but the son got lucky cause his father found him
And thats how it ended with his father and him

feed back on what you guys and girls think thank you


2 Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...wpost&t=232032
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223751

[Gifted Signs]

uppin for feedback

[Soule]

Dope as fuck homie.
You put a lot of soul in it and nice drops.

Funny how a alias does his own collab lol but nice shit.

[ItsCyrious]

i am feelin these verses....

the emotion from hawkeyes is good and so is the structure, and i feel that both of yall have different perspectives of the same topic...which i like to c..Gifted had more of the hood side of things nd hawke had more of the family like things..i was feelin the situations cuz i grew up witouty a pop and shyt was hard for me for a while, but im str8 now...nice flow, i would say work on the vocab tho

[Mic D]

lmao.................BLAH...........shit u touching on an emotional topic and there is no emotion..... its just BLAH....... yall both said the same shit......... no creativity...... no realness...... Stupid muthafuckas look at a fuckin concept and thats it.... Fuckin idiotz have no clue about actual skilll..........blah..... both verses were farr to basic no matter which angle u look at it.......... Structure...blah.........vocab....blah....... emotion....blah............ imagery......blah.............. Actual writing techniques......Blah