Remember?

[God's Deciple]

R e m e m b e r?


I Look back at the past,how fast time can go i think
Been thru crashed times,yet i still manage not to sink
I look up at the sky,and try to wait patienly for a reply
Wondering when i will die,i think of the fun times and cry
All i want to know,what is this feeling i feel,its undescrible
My lifes been buried under this rock,im still stuck under the rubble
Everyday's a struggle,Gang related situtations isnt a life for me
Descrminations decide your decisions,everyday i wish to be lucky
Im fortunate to be alive and stabaly working and still stand strong
Looks decide your life,so i know iv been damned and wrong
Thoughts so long,i think everyday,enuff to fill up the world
Iv been curled into a shape with no remorse,i just twirl
Treated like dirt i wish everyday was different and not the same
But this life im living is a game,and my life is draining,with nothing to gain
I want to be there for someone,want to be important
Than with my power i will help you sow that heart ripped
I want to fill that empty space in you,want to bridge the gap
Dont want to be fooed so i trust you,for me not to be a sap
I've suffered for you,i took the blows that were meant to hit you
Ignored the ugly rude rumors just to make the lies not seem true
As i tell this to you,i ask you just for a favor and keep your heart ember
Can you always be there for me,and these memories would you Remember?

[God's Deciple]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...11#post3441711
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247453

[God's Deciple]

Rise rise rise.

[EyeBite]

Well...this was a good drop....topic was cool.....sorry i didnt see this before cuz it was like the last on the page......rhyme scheme was good..not too simple..mostly complex...same with vocab..flow was smooth and strucutre was like prefect..well done...good drop..keep it up..peace and can you vote on the battle in my sig..thanks

[Vylint]

Shit was good content wise but the sacrifice was great. Some shit just wasnt clicking with me turning this from a good peice to just an average open mic. Tho i must admit, it's some of the best work on the front page. A little to short without enough meaning behind it on a played- to -death approach. But keep writing and return the favor on Vylint ; Broken Glass


thanks playboy. peace

[God's Deciple]

^Lol @ playboy.Ill check it out.Try to check the boom box if you can.