why is it still 2-2 if Lex's vote got dqed?
but vote poeple.
and leave links
why is it still 2-2 if Lex's vote got dqed?
but vote poeple.
and leave links
this kid is wack, that would explain why u cant get in a crew
and it really sux, when after all ur pens are sicker then you
no
all the bitches in ur family suck me, there all i need for groupies
and you kno its sad, when u catch urself biting from movies
meh, word it better
im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin
punch ?
u would think im will ferrell, the way i'll leave u kicking and screamin
and you'll neva beat me, so u might as well jus keep on dreamin'
no
watch how i throw away pens, this pig is low on ink
send punches to Bic, cuz i'll only have paper left to think
ok
NY could never get a bitch, Im speaking literal cuz you hate em
Yeah this niggas nuts dropped, then some squirrels came n ate em
ok**
Pens, he fucks hoes on regular basis I know that it hurts
Cus the only time you do dates, is when you postin a verse
meh
Im connectin your face to my hands man, the punches are landin
Muthafucka im known to drop raw, so just expect to be standin
no
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
no
If we did we woulda noticed, just retire, I hope that you quit
Cuz ill make you give ups, like when no one votes on ya shit
meh
This was a weak battle. Ny you had a very weak verse as you see in the brakedown, seen better from you. Pen you had a nice opener and that is what won it for me. Um that is really all I can say he had a decent line to nothing. Ny drop better next time.
v/pen (better verse)
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im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin'
vs.
Pens, he fucks hoes on regular basis I know that it hurts
Cus the only time you do dates, is when you postin a verse
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
If we did we woulda noticed, just retire, I hope that you quit
Cuz ill make you give ups, like when no one votes on ya shit
NY, you came at him with personals here. But the quote with the "my entrance, your departure" was pointless. The next bar you wrote didnt even play off it. You didnt pull out the punches untill the last line, the bic line. But it still wasnt creative enough to be dope. Pens had the best line in the battle. Ny is back/no one gave a fuck that you left line. Pens just came harder with punches and concepts. Had one line that could be considered personal, and that was his best line. so vote pens
v/pens
this kid is wack, that would explain why u cant get in a crew
and it really sux, when after all ur pens are sicker then you
no. weak attempt on nameplay.
all the bitches in ur family suck me, there all i need for groupies
and you kno its sad, when u catch urself biting from movies
OK. personals meh.
im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin'
weak personal.
u would think im will ferrell, the way i'll leave u kicking and screamin
and you'll neva beat me, so u might as well jus keep on dreamin'
self glory. nope.
watch how i throw away pens, this pig is low on ink
send punches to Bic, cuz i'll only have paper left to think
concept could've been good. but nope.
NYisBack - you had a pretty bland verse. and i didn't like much of anything out of it. your best punch was below average and your concepts are weak. sting your opponent, not rub their back. and trying to make personals off of EVERY QUOTE HE'S EVER MADE ..was kinda wack.
vs.
NY could never get a bitch, Im speaking literal cuz you hate em
Yeah this niggas nuts dropped, then some squirrels came n ate em
i've used this before. and when i used it, the line was played lol. so playeeed. nope.
Pens, he fucks hoes on regular basis I know that it hurts
Cus the only time you do dates, is when you postin a verse
lol, ok. wordings meh, but cool concept.
Im connectin your face to my hands man, the punches are landin
Muthafucka im known to drop raw, so just expect to be standin
nope.
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
harsh personal, but there's no proof, there's no creativity, or real witt to it.
If we did we woulda noticed, just retire, I hope that you quit
Cuz ill make you give ups, like when no one votes on ya shit
this could've been a lot better. good concept.
Pens Ill - this verse showed A LOT of potential. your concepts are pretty good, and you brought a sort of freshness to the battle. i really liked a couple of those. some bad ones, but everyone has their lows. you show a lot of potential in the future, so keep swinging ..
NY sucked, Pens was harder ..simple as that.
v. Pens
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