Wyte vs. Look$

[Supernat]

Im going to just kick back, and take the fuckin win out of your hand
Cause ill take you to the beach, & leave with you buried in the sand
naw
You can’t win, ill leave u dead on the site cause u aren’t packing text
But you aren't cocky – no thats just your preference when having sex
no,statement
Fuck this hoe, ill merk u in so many different ways, u winning is rare
Because I'm always gro’in* - while u're just keeping your mouth there
s'ok
You think your so dope and cool, the truth is that your actually lame
He got so much garbage Bruin*, hockey had another season in shame
decent
You aren’t winning, hell no you SUCK, your walking the wrong path
^Because you could be a smoker - & you still wouldn’t own a match
s'ok

This verse was alright, had the hockey line and the match line was alright
but you started off shaky so you should fix that up for next time.


vs.

ima pin point dis bout, cus my win against u is a bit overdue
and the stakes are gon b high......right after i stick em up in you
played
hes a fuckin jew..
...u dont belive in crusefix's, well watch me nail dis fag
hes ingulfted so many dicks, hes become the gay national flag
no way
i aint the one 2 brag but wen it comes 2 skills im just overwellming
hes gon look at my past verses,..
.....n instead of bittin a line hes gon copy the whole thing
naw, concept sucked anyway
n it aint spring,so after i shower my punches you wont bounce back
cus ill leave you out of breath, like ur havin an asthma attack
played
it wont b long, matter of fact ppl wont remember after i take wyte out
leave u der blackout,..
..ur a well known biter 4 lines...cus ur always on a drought
meh

Look$, maybe i'm just voting too harsh but i didnt like this verse man,
you just need more experience, try for better concepts aswell ones that peeps'll be goin oooo shit its over! na mean?

well wyte had a decent punch about hockey and thats what won the battle



v. Wyte

[Wyte..]

Upping 4.

[Wyte..]

Upping 5.

[Lord of Pens]

Im going to just kick back, and take the fuckin win out of your hand
Cause ill take you to the beach, & leave with you buried in the sand
You can’t win, ill leave u dead on the site cause u aren’t packing text
But you aren't cocky – no thats just your preference when having sex
Fuck this hoe, ill merk u in so many different ways, u winning is rare
Because I'm always gro’in* - while u're just keeping your mouth there
^These were decent concepts Wyte. But work on your wording a little. The first two couplets are fine but the last one needed to be worded better. Again, Decent concepts though.

vs.

ima pin point dis bout, cus my win against u is a bit overdue
and the stakes are gon b high......right after i stick em up in you
^This was the only line I liked and high stakes lines are kinda played now. Been used millions of times in LLL so....yeah.

This was an ok battle. Truly, Wyte took this battle quite easily. lOOk$, really man...you've gotta step it up. Your punches aren't connecting well. That's one major thing you need to work on. Connecting. Wyte's first two couplets hit alot harder then basically anything in lOOk$ verse. That's why he won this battle. Also, he had much better flow. But this was an ok battle. But my vote definitely goes to

\\//Wyte

[Tragedian.]

Im going to just kick back, and take the fuckin win out of your hand
Cause ill take you to the beach, & leave with you buried in the sand
lmao nice
You can’t win, ill leave u dead on the site cause u aren’t packing text
But you aren't cocky – no thats just your preference when having sex
meh ok
Fuck this hoe, ill merk u in so many different ways, u winning is rare
Because I'm always gro’in* - while u're just keeping your mouth there
nice
You think your so dope and cool, the truth is that your actually lame
He got so had another semuch garbage Bruin*, hockey ason in shame
good.
You aren’t winning, hell no you SUCK, your walking the wrong path
^Because you could be a smoker - & you still wouldn’t own a match
lmao.

vs

ima pin point dis bout, cus my win against u is a bit overdue
and the stakes are gon b high......right after i stick em up in you
hes a fuckin jew..
nah.
...u dont belive in crusefix's, well watch me nail dis fag
hes ingulfted so many dicks, hes become the gay national flag
played.
i aint the one 2 brag but wen it comes 2 skills im just overwellming
hes gon look at my past verses,..
.....n instead of bittin a line hes gon copy the whole thing
nah just weak
n it aint spring,so after i shower my punches you wont bounce back
cus ill leave you out of breath, like ur havin an asthma attack
played
it wont b long, matter of fact ppl wont remember after i take wyte out
leave u der blackout,..
..ur a well known biter 4 lines...cus ur always on a drought
nice

v/wyte for coming harder all though...looks u dropped pretty weak..alot of played lines...strutre was real bad...multies we're weak...vocab was simple..wyte took it with only a couple of played lines and some nice personals.