feeble said he'd drop some decent feed at some point
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feeble said he'd drop some decent feed at some point
more votes
The Iron Fist is rusty but I'm still comin harder to smash y'all
Yeah you're rust-free, but that's easy with a lard ass n glass jaw
Why try to fight, clown? why battle ME when you could choose who?
Shit, I guess I'm the only cat ya ain't embarrassed to lose to
Last time this bitch took on a vet, I couldnt've wished him worse
The outcome was fuckin ugly, like Cry's mom giving birth
Forget writing a shitty verse, try harder though ya still won't beat me
S'a shame for you ^that means forgettin how to write completely
Vs.
rusty? the bitch must be, n' really man, i aint to be crossed with
but vaskez still has that crazy skill ..the faggot's definitley lost it
i'm raw bitch, n' after that 1-2 shit, i see your more raw than me
cuz i knew shit's was fishy.. when a bitten punch won the league
poor ol' noob, my fists are crude, while yours are scared and lame
n' everyone wants v-status.. but 's the one to change their name
Close battle but i got v winning by a bit.
Vote/Vaskez
4-2, good job vask
ehhh...vaskez is rusty, and cry just is dropping crappy for his skill...vaskez, nice verse for being rusty, i cracked up @ the hard line and your closer...cry, the only thing i liked was your closer...shit dudem step it up a little, i know you're better than that...vaskez got this.
glycerine.
5-2 any more votes?
lol @ the wink after "good job", Cry, cheeky bastard, hehe
Fool, I had to write that in my checkin, else no one will
Why front...
...you blatantly need reminding to actually show...some skill
straight foward
Ya wanted this, no backin out ho, I got mountains of indignation
It's on now, so s'clear I don't mean Cry's fountain of inspiration
lol aight
hah, bitch...
Never thought ya'd see me back, but I'm here now n testin dudes
If YOU leave here, peeps'll soon see ya back...
...is as beat-up as the rest of you
aight
The Iron Fist is rusty but I'm still comin harder to smash y'all
Yeah you're rust-free, but that's easy with a lard ass n glass jaw
aight
Ya say ya improved, I made you what you are, Cry, don't forget
And the voters can see, it only takes a few punches to the head
naaah
That proves you're puss, ain't manly, so don't try wack stuff
'stead of tryina act hard, just admit to ya girl that ya need viagra
played concept
You's a con, a fake rapper, with those punches you'll get smite down
But I can see the fire in every concept...
...for the one I'm battlin right now
so-so
Why try to fight, clown? why battle ME when you could choose who?
Shit, I guess I'm the only cat ya ain't embarrassed to lose to
yeah....
Last time this bitch took on a vet, I couldnt've wished him worse
The outcome was fuckin ugly, like Cry's mom giving birth
naaah
Forget writing a shitty verse, try harder though ya still won't beat me
S'a shame for you ^that means forgettin how to write completely
aight
Vs
you've got veteran verses for sure, n' they got a mind'a their own
but i can really help ya punches out.. as soon as i find a home
yeah....aight
your blind n' alone, girlfriend? nope, nothin', thats rot at it's worst
i was so happy to see you post here, and for once coming in first
aight, didn't hit hard
rusty? the bitch must be, n' really man, i aint to be crossed with
but vaskez still has that crazy skill ..the faggot's definitley lost it
nah...aight concept
i'm raw bitch, n' after that 1-2 shit, i see your more raw than me
cuz i knew shit's was fishy.. when a bitten punch won the league
lol
he throws fatigue, ya fast to act, n' i still see a strong wackness
dude, ya known to drop quickly ..which explains ya long absence
lol
ya been wack since, but i'm christian, n' it's truth ya said to face
n' ya'll know that i look up to him, now that he's in a better place
wow i liked how you worded this
what a waste, i hate to slaughter a vet, yet the whores screwed
but cheers to our first battle, dude ..and none of em' are for you
yea...naaah
poor ol' noob, my fists are crude, while yours are scared and lame
n' everyone wants v-status.. but 's the one to change their name
aight
fuck this dame, any girl ya touch runs away, ya in a bad direction
and like any turn off does ..this fag's failed to make a connection
fillerlike punch
ruin ya complexion, no doubt your whoreable.. n' i'm the demeaner
you can bet your bottom dollar s'no lie, but ya aint got that either
naaah
Close battle, Vaskez is showing he ain't far off from having a shot at feeble if he's able to match Cry. I felt this was one of Cry's better verses, more consistent compared to other weeks. Both had worded their punches good, but the fresher punches came from Cry. Some of Vas punches detracted from the whole verse like the viagra line. So I got Cry taking this close battle.
Fool, I had to write that in my checkin, else no one will
Why front...
...you blatantly need reminding to actually show...some skill
by the time you read my vote you will agree with me this is wack
Ya wanted this, no backin out ho, I got mountains of indignation
It's on now, so s'clear I don't mean Cry's fountain of inspiration
your shitty wording is back
hah, bitch...
Never thought ya'd see me back, but I'm here now n testin dudes
If YOU leave here, peeps'll soon see ya back...
...is as beat-up as the rest of you
yeah uhm i've seen this flipped a billion times myself but this one is still okay-ih
The Iron Fist is rusty but I'm still comin harder to smash y'all
Yeah you're rust-free, but that's easy with a lard ass n glass jaw
lmao
Ya say ya improved, I made you what you are, Cry, don't forget
And the voters can see, it only takes a few punches to the head
...
That proves you're puss, ain't manly, so don't try wack stuff
'stead of tryina act hard, just admit to ya girl that ya need viagra
lol come on i got a lot of stick for using hard/penis wordplay, you are no different
You's a con, a fake rapper, with those punches you'll get smite down
But I can see the fire in every concept...
...for the one I'm battlin right now
lol lolo l
Why try to fight, clown? why battle ME when you could choose who?
Shit, I guess I'm the only cat ya ain't embarrassed to lose to
lol that's uhhh kinda kickin your own balls
Last time this bitch took on a vet, I couldnt've wished him worse
The outcome was fuckin ugly, like Cry's mom giving birth
rofllfahsdmjgxbhfesi *dead* at the truth behind this.
Forget writing a shitty verse, try harder though ya still won't beat me
S'a shame for you ^that means forgettin how to write completely
fucked up wording
VVVVVVVSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
you've got veteran verses for sure, n' they got a mind'a their own
but i can really help ya punches out.. as soon as i find a home
boo
your blind n' alone, girlfriend? nope, nothin', thats rot at it's worst
i was so happy to see you post here, and for once coming in first
sdigh what the
rusty? the bitch must be, n' really man, i aint to be crossed with
but vaskez still has that crazy skill ..the faggot's definitley lost it
didn't execute ths good at all, i see the potential
i'm raw bitch, n' after that 1-2 shit, i see your more raw than me
cuz i knew shit's was fishy.. when a bitten punch won the league
lol
he throws fatigue, ya fast to act, n' i still see a strong wackness
dude, ya known to drop quickly ..which explains ya long absence
nyeh
ya been wack since, but i'm christian, n' it's truth ya said to face
n' ya'll know that i look up to him, now that he's in a better place
no, wtf this isnt frontlines
what a waste, i hate to slaughter a vet, yet the whores screwed
but cheers to our first battle, dude ..and none of em' are for you
no
poor ol' noob, my fists are crude, while yours are scared and lame
n' everyone wants v-status.. but 's the one to change their name
*sigh*
fuck this dame, any girl ya touch runs away, ya in a bad direction
and like any turn off does ..this fag's failed to make a connection
.sd,lvbsd no
ruin ya complexion, no doubt your whoreable.. n' i'm the demeaner
you can bet your bottom dollar s'no lie, but ya aint got that either
lol cool
okay wow his was pretty one sided. cry had real nice concepts that coulda got him the win easil but he fluffed it up, vaskez was all over the place with a good mix of shit and decent lines but he had waymoe decen lines than cry
so v/VASKEZ *watches hell freeze over*
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