LLL Jr Contendership - Alphabetized (6 - 1) Vs OnKor (6 - 2)

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Lol @ Tebo. That shit was kinda creative.

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Alphabetized
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Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
Ok, nice wordplay. Great overall. 2/2
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
Ok, ok... pretty decent. Not real harsh, but ok. 1.5/2
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
Hmm... ok... not really a punch. 1/2
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
Hmmm... damn brah, this went over my head. W/P in tsunami? I'll judge it like you're talking about him being washed up. 1/2
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
Nice wordplay again. Humorus too, lol. 2/2
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
I wasn't feelin this bar to be honest... I get it though. 1/2

- 8.5/12 - Ok, ok. Finally a good verse to look at. Great way to open the battle with a knockout punch, kinda got weak in the middle, the the junior line freshened it up again. It's an above average, near-consistent verse.

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Onkor
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Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
Hmmm... statement. Not that harsh. 0.5/2
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
Didn't REALLY sound like 'oughta quit', but it was decent enough. 1.5/2
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
This was 'lol' material, and you get points for being humorus. 1.5/2
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
Ooooh... For some reason, this was pretty harsh/mean to me. Lol. 2/2
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
Who cares about the voters? Could've been used better. 1/2
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
I believe this is played on Alpha, and the wording wasn't dope enough to make it fresh. 1/2

- 7.5/12 - Ok, this verse was another decent one. You had about three bars that were pretty good. Your opener was pretty poor imo, and your opener should always be one of your strongest bars in your verse. Other than that, this was a decent verse, and could've beaten half of the chumps in here, but Alpha came a bit better, and had 2 quoteables to your 1. So...

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VOTE: ALPHA
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[Alphabetized]

6-1.

[Donald Trump]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
lol cool
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
rofl nice
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
cool
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
weak
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
lol creative
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
meh closer

vs



Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
meh opener
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
cool but forced sorta
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
lol cool
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
rofl cool
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
cool
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
meh

v-Alpha better verse

[Mariah]

Alpha's opener was funnier to me than most people I guess.

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!

vs.

Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked


Not even close really, Onkor's mist line is SOOOO played. Seen it on RB llike 10 times. Alpha had an overall better verse, so he gets my vote.

v/Alpha

[kid sick']

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
cool
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
meh
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
ok.....
k...We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
decent..
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
ok
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
cooolll

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Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era'
ok
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
ok
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
na, seen this a lot
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
ok personal
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
meh
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
no


v/Alpha


Decent battle but onkor had some meh lines at the end. Both did decent but alpha had the stronger verse. Good job my dudes..

[OnKor]

1-9
G'luck in the champ match

[Alphabetized]

Ya dude, stay up.
Your really elevating.. I liked your verse a lot.
You'll get there soon enough.

[JayUNZ]

alph
Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
^^OK I GUESS
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
^^NO
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
^^^OK
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
^^DECENT
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
^^^NOT REALLY THAT HARD
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
^^^OK


onkor
Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
^^I GET IT AND ALL THAT..BUT I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
^^OK
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
^^NO..IM TIRED OF SHAQ SHOOTIN LINES
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
^^MEH
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
^^^SOMBODY SAID THIS TO ME ALREADY
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
^^MEH

V/ALPHA

[Viktor Fallon]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
^^^Decent opener
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
^^^lolol good
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
^^^good personal
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
^^^okay
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
^^^decent
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
^^^decent closer


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Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
^^^good opener
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
^^^okay
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
^^^no
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
^^^nah
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
^^^okay decent line
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
^^^nah i wasnt feelin this closer


V/alpha this was closer than i thought...on came with acouple of good lines the rest was weak..he had some playyed name plays off alpha that didnt hit..alpha came with a solid verse that had some consistent lines and was harder hitting overall

[D.Silver]

10 - 1 to Alphabetized & Winner.

Alphabetized Wins (7 - 1)
OnKor Loses (6 - 4)*

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