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Thread: Alone

  1. #1
    That's Right...I'm White Verbatim's Avatar
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    Alone

    she left me, i'm all alone
    it came out of no where, like a cyclone
    i wish i could take back all those things i said
    but i can't, so i'm here posting on this thread
    with all this comotion, why do i feel so wrong
    can't show emotion, gotta be strong
    i know somehow, this was all my fault
    wish i were locked away, in a lead vault
    i can never do anything right
    inside of me, anger always seems to ignite
    always trying hold it back
    sometimes i just can't, and i gotta attack
    hurting people that i don't want to
    causing carnage, always scared of what i'll do



    again it's short, but whatever
    say what ya want

  2. #2
    phoenix808
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    the rhyme's were tight, length was fine, rythm was good too keep up the good work

    peace

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    That's Right...I'm White Verbatim's Avatar
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    thanks
    come on peeps
    keep uppin

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