I just wrote this off the top of my head for this girl I like....Um I just want opinions if it sounds good.
This confusion and pain, Iv never felt the same
Is this my fate or is destiny making a mistake
Its a relationship im trying to create
I know what im feeling this isnt a mistake
These feelings are true, this love is for you
These feelings are strong, so now im writing a love song
All these thoughts rushing through my mind
Your beauty and elegance, its so divine
The second I saw you, I discovered a sign
I promise Ill never step outta line
Words cannot express how I feel
But I promise what I feel is defintely real
Your hugs wipe the tears away
When I hold your hand I feel my heart sway
Its completely okay, I understand to the fullest extent
I dont mean to pressure or disappoint
But when your not here its tears that i repent
Every single day, My minds all over the place
But then i see your face, then i start saying grace
God put an angel in my life
Now iv got a reason to avoid strife
Im gonna stay outta trouble and start to behave
Ill hear you say 'I love you' before I hit the grave
Because these feelings are too strong
To let it all move along
When I feel the touch of your hand...
True love is on demand..
Coz my throat feels like sand
I cant breathe, My hearts beating too fast
Is this really love...Im starting to believe...
But before I die...Its those words Ill receive,
I just want to hear you say it one time...
"I love you" Because This poem...Its all about me and you
My heart beats strong for you shez...
Your name is scarred into my heart...
Because truthfully...This is just the start...
I love you shez
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