Good verse picks, bad beat setup, the verse hook at the beginning was the shit into the build up, then it started over and it felt like you were just dropping the verse with that. I would of loved to see the cintinuation of createaion isntead of a loop over. Im workin on surround sound so I blasted the respect for ya. You really need to work on matchin the vocal sound sets with the beat, it definately sounds like they are way to projected over the beat.
Consistant flow on the beat, and over all was alright. Keep up tha work!