Summer Dreams.

[Messiah.]

I was inspired to write this whilst watching my girlfriend do a photoshoot.

Here is a picture for context.

EDIT - Picture taken away

My heart is clasped by symphonic strings
tightening with every breath I bestow,
that essence of hers is praying on my soul
as I fade slowly into that abyss called love.
The chasm that once severed my mind
is now flooded with that emotional symphony
playing its notes through my eyes,
I close them and try to harvest my thoughts
but I only see her, windswept in summer dreams.


Thankyou for reading,

Messiah.

[Messiah.]

1. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...120/index.html
2. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...476/index.html
3. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...049/index.html
4. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...519/index.html

[Galactus The Devourer]

Well your a lucky man..

as for your poem..


it was good for what it was nawmean, I like how you explained they way your heart tightens when you think about her. I also liked the harvest my thoughts part.. although im sure ive heard it before.

anyways good drop..

[GrimReapa™]

mmmm. scrumsious messy. the poem was decriptive nice piece good use of vocab. the content about ur feelings was there. overall a dope piece. good shit.

[Messiah.]

Thankyou very much for the feed guys,

Messiah.

[BreezyFlow]

Liked the piece man, emotional piece with only a few descriptive words, you must have put a lot of love and feeling into this, great poem

[iLL sPoKeN.]

Short and sweet, I like it man, keep it up! Very emotional and descriptive if you're good at comprehending poetry, definitely not something someone simple minded could understand.

[Novade]

that essence of hers is praying on my soul
as I fade slowly into that abyss called love.
The chasm that once severed my mind
is now flooded with that emotional symphony


great imagery,

Overall: i felt this drop, good imagery and the wording
was nice and solid, not much to say here, but nice
short and sweet drop...keep posting...really enjoyed
this look forward to reading more from u ...props....
return the favor..