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    Arrow The answer is nothing and everything

    Im all but nothing but a something in a all
    Im the force in everything yet an empty source
    My form, is exposed only to those who are blind
    And only the people blessed with deaf hear my bass flights
    My pen is my sword, and im making flesh bleed ink
    Sun heatsink fused with cool moon outbalancing
    I bring forth darkness opposed to my enlightenment
    I sing religion with science, I piss venom of a python
    I kill eleven with an even mind of fighting
    Speaking with my conscience, I disagree with myself




    I dont understand how everyone relates fire to hell
    I dont understand how people think our existence is made of cells
    Theres no proof, theres no proof theres a moon
    If I can lie, then that means astronaunts can lie too
    You cant convince me theres existence in emotion
    You refuse to believe theres bussiness beneath the ocean
    And every member of rapbattles who sits here typing
    Is in validation of access to sattilite survillance sightings
    Can a single man govern a population of 1 point eight billion?
    When does the point of laughter and jokes get serious?
    No ones ever been near a star, to see its made of gas
    I dance with no pants on streets, and they believe im mad
    You see, anything abnormal to these people, they start falling
    In hope's calling and are forced in to change it back to normal
    Why is it, that I speak in sound, and not in light Aura's
    Why not aurora borealis in desert sands
    Why not torture mirages in blizzard lands
    I hate the fact I have to stand to act upon movement
    And if I was god of wisdom, could I still be useless?
    And if I was god of sex, im i still liable for an erection?
    Why do I have to bend spoons? Cant I break cereal?
    Seperate milk from its man-made infested genitic material?
    And I wonder, if god really did exist
    Did he have any choice of what his creation is?

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    - You live in a world of questions, trying to to find the stars that hold the answers, but ask youself, what do the stars question about you? - unknown

    - I dont question life, i live it - unknown

    - If i knew the answer behind the reason of why we live, logically, the thought of it would kill a person, due to them thoughts being close to reality, and anything even close to reality, mathmatically cannot cease to exist - Mr ???
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    Pretty good piece my man, i enjoyed the topic, it was pretty original and decently written, one of the best ive seen you do, it could use a couple more ijnternals and multi's to strengthen it slightly, but all in all not a bad piece, it could use a little structure-work to maintain a solid flow, but it wasnt a bad piece.

    You have potential. Props.

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    thanx, upping for this though

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    uppin dis

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    deep shit... that walk naked think i'm mad bit was funny as hell
    I dance with no pants on streets, and they believe im mad

    and this was thoughtful...
    And if I was god of sex, im i still liable for an erection?
    Why do I have to bend spoons? Cant I break cereal?
    Seperate milk from its man-made infested genitic material?
    And I wonder, if god really did exist
    Did he have any choice of what his creation is?
    "actions speak louder than words"

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    thanx for the feedback eyo, still uppin this

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    some deep shit
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    ^ Your Going On The Morons List For That.

    And I Replied To This, So Reply To Mine: 'Lego Life'

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    it flowed well...
    good vocab..

    ..."Why not aurora borealis in desert sands
    Why not torture mirages in blizzard lands"... dope as fuck!!

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    yo give a fair vote......

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    The thing is what you say is true. i like the topic the most. plus, those quotes are ill. the whole piece makes you want to think, and if you can get someone to change their feelings about something they know, you're revolutionary. good job. the other thing i question about your style is do you intend to rhyme or be poetic?

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    id thought id do a deep topical for once, still upping on this though

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