Wow.. Nice Shit Pot..
The Vocab Was Nice
But It Was Impressive
To See How Well You
Flowed Along With It
Good Piece.. Liked The
Equation In The Intro
Made Much Sense Now
Good Piece.. Keep Droppin
8/10
Wow.. Nice Shit Pot..
The Vocab Was Nice
But It Was Impressive
To See How Well You
Flowed Along With It
Good Piece.. Liked The
Equation In The Intro
Made Much Sense Now
Good Piece.. Keep Droppin
8/10
Thanx for the replys
Pot` Ed.
I dropped to show RM what hot was;
And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra
Your text is just another weak display
One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign
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flow was dope, vocabulary was dope, multis were dope, only problem is u lost me in some parts man, rhymin too much got me in the flow more than ur topic know what i mean nice shit would be better to hear in audio but here's u best line to me
now, like i said, this was the dopest part of ur piece, but u rhymed so much u lost me in what u was trying to get to, overall this a good piece, nice rhymes good vocabulary and flowpot1ent's best line:
Liable to not be admirable and have implications in creation
If we're def to what manifests then its detrimental potential
Intentional conventional progress leaves hope compressed
Express Impress with science being perpetual exceptional
Whats Correctable? Only the scale of the tactical process
Rating:
9/10
LIKE EVERYONE SAID ALREADY, NICE VOCAB! I WOULD HAVE TO HEAR THE DELIVERY BEFORE I COULD REALLY JUDGE THOUGH. A LOT OF POTENTIAL.
BOMBATOMIK
Pot` Ed.
I dropped to show RM what hot was;
And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra
Your text is just another weak display
One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign
<center>The Faculty</center>
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