Can I get some feed
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Last edited by Emily; March 7th, 2016 at 11:46 PM
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@Jukon , I appreciate the feed.
Those lines you speak of, the four you couldn't remember being there...were there lol.
You probably speed read it and didn't notice them.
As always, your feed is always valued and respected.
Thank you.
hmm if u say so lol
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
i know lol it was early though, thats one of the most memorable lines of the piece
im an idiot
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
@TheIllyricist sorry about the delay bro, but i got you, tomorrow, on your piece. Just skimmed over it and definitely fuckin with it!
No worries Sammy, take your time man! I appreciate it the lookin' out
“Those whom life does not cure death will. The world is quite ruthless in selecting between the dream and the reality, even where we will not. Between the wish and the thing the world lies waiting.”
To have just a few words is more than an honor for me @Emily
I appreciate all the kind words. As well as the time you spent reading.... It helps me even though I don't show it.
I'm a depressed happy cunt. Don't fuck with me. I love you, but I'm crazy.[/I]
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Yeh he needs to post some more shit, probably the most entertaining for me to read right now lol
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
I've got phx on that list plus a shit load more.
I'm loving so many pieces atm, it's insane.
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I don't usually do this, but . . .
Check out my "The Vision Heir" piece. I think the content and the flow with its rhyme scheme and multis and all the other nifty nuances make it an entertaining read. I'd really love to convert it into an audio if I had the set up. No feedback is necessary, I'd just love for others to read it. And if it sucks, you can kill me later and sell my baby sister into slavery (she'll fetch a pretty penny, I do believe).
Thank you @Emily for the feedback by the way whilst I'm on the topic. As always, your words are highly regarded and appreciated.