Quick drop. 12 - 16 lines. Due by tonight 12 AM.
Quick drop. 12 - 16 lines. Due by tonight 12 AM.
Ok that’s pretty fast, currently 2230 in U.K, so I’ll just drop now, got to get that beauty sleep.
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You should have never accepted this bro!
I’d beat ten of you, with my hands tied and eyes closed.
Perfect prose and flows, helps me keep these average Joes’ hosed.
Aeeyo must know now how this shit goes,
Press send, take the L,
And leave looking like a bitch from Bang Bros.
I take o’s, A, E, Y and O’s
Beat you comatose,
I’d happily happy slap this trap looking mother Fo.
I’ve read your battles bro,
You’re fucking shit lad, but at least now you know
I’m the best here lol, I only joined an hour ago
Anyone else wants to battle hit me up, just getting back into freestyle so using this place to practice
i got tons of shit to hit u wit, beat you wit material that is already played
but for now i'll keep ur mom out of my lines, you won't see the heavy-wait
cuz i'm coming for the throne, i'm surgical when i clown, kid
i'll drill right through ur fillers, then cap you wit my crown, bitch
niggas thought i was wack, but they know my personal cracks will sting
and my very first verses dropped got niggas like @.SiQ. still mad at me
so you hide behind a mask, ur not brave enough to put ya hand to the trigger
make this hero vanish when i put him in the Guantlet and snap all of his fingers
new niggas is niggas i knew, fuk aliases, i don't need to know who this is
fuk word play, just plain talk... u a vet scared this newb will ruin ur shit
and if u are from the UK, welcome... let me show u how American niggas do business
i'll down an Old English, then show up to ur weak as tea time with a biscuit
but if this is @BashEmUP , @For Battling , @MV, @Barcotic , @Jit..... whoever this is
if ur butt hurt then "vote = Techinept" but i bet u'll still choke on my spit
Fuck it.
Omg.. I was like this too but honestly... why do the newbs never even bother to adjust to a text style...smh
You’re fucking shit lad, but at least now you know
I’m the best here lol, I only joined an hour ago
^Atleast you laughed at your self in this line.. this is a no go otherwise on every level.
vs
i got tons of shit to hit u wit, beat you wit material that is already played
but for now i'll keep ur mom out of my lines, you won't see the heavy-wait
^cool minus a sub par setup and a bit confusing 'wait' wording on the punch
cuz i'm coming for the throne, i'm surgical when i clown, kid
i'll drill right through ur fillers, then cap you wit my crown, bitch
^nicely done.
and if u are from the UK, welcome... let me show u how American niggas do business
i'll down an Old English, then show up to ur weak as tea time with a biscuit
^this was lmao funny. dope bar minus a lengthy setup. (n dont miss the 's' on "ass") unleass u intended to.
V/ Aeeyo for a better verse in every category.. @Techinept , if you intend on sticking around you should consider reading a few battles and formulating a style that appeals in delivery.. this is not text battling you presented us voters.. it would even be a very very subpar audio diss..
Last edited by Networth; December 11th, 2018 at 12:17 PM
^^^Good shit
Up for votes.
Techinept
You’re fucking shit lad, but at least now you know
I’m the best here lol, I only joined an hour ago ������
this is a very strong statement and the closest thing i found to a punch line.
vs
Aeeyo
cuz i'm coming for the throne, i'm surgical when i clown, kid
i'll drill right through ur fillers, then cap you wit my crown, bitch
this was ok. wording wording wording my friend
so you hide behind a mask, ur not brave enough to put ya hand to the trigger
make this hero vanish when i put him in the Guantlet and snap all of his fingers
yooo i actually liked this bar. this was light weight savage bruh
nd if u are from the UK, welcome... let me show u how American niggas do business
i'll down an Old English, then show up to ur weak as tea time with a biscuit
Aeeyo..who ghost writing for you ill bruH? nah playing i lke this shit
v/Aeeyo
techi you just didnt have any real punches imo while Aeeyo seemed a bit upset and let his pen do the talking. good shit my guy.
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Lol... good stuff, @Networth @MV
I re-read the verse a few times and made changes before posting it. I hope Cred shows up in LLL cuz I got some heat for that nigga. I feel like he won't show, though...
I'm trying to get the "DAMN!" feeling before I drop a verse... we'll see how that goes.
Bump
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V- Neither,,,
u both are terrible.. one with horrible structure and one just plain terrible... for folks to read this and actually pick a winner is a waste of time...
try elevatin....
smh...
Nothing
Vs
All Misses with a few ok concepts that werent executed well at all
V/Aeyo
Nothing
Vs
Something that resembles a battle verse from the fucking 90s lol
V. Aeeyo
@AeeYo wins
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.