WK30 CHAMPMATCH: Unfukwitable (3-0) vs daveDILLY (8-7) (UNFUK WINS)

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Unfukwitable
@daveDILLY

[Unfukwitable]

Check

[daveDILLY]

here
good luck

[Unfukwitable]

A Kevlar vest won’t protect’em from gettin his jaw broken & Za’s stolen,
I’ll take the ‘Armor, Dill O’s’ & shells hittin flesh’ll get the ball rolling!


Za is a US term for eXOTic weed

[daveDILLY]

i suggest minding ur own. cuz all ya doing is heating the gas..
go ahead meddle in my business, thats where i’ll hang this award 4 beating ur ass

[Bag Mandela]

Fukwit - can tell you put work in to this, the armadillo part worked nicely but the armour dill O's didn't make sense to me. Its either O's/owns which is a reach or O's/owes but nothing connects to him owing it. Other than that decent punch.

Dave I thought the meddle / award idea was OK but it's unclear where you'll hang the award. Sounds like you'll hang it on a medal.

Think Fukwit had too much going on in the bar for Dave's meddle wordplay to match up to it soo

Vote Unfukwitable

[Meks.]

Thought unfuck was maybe a little too much. Too much focus on all the wp and connecting everything that the landing of the punch at the end fell flat for me.

Dave's was straight to the point, a solid bar with a good wp and landed cleaner.

V/dave

[Fresh]

I thought unfuk was dope

Take an arm or dill O's (oz's) was slick

Meddle / medal play was a little light for me

v/ unfuk

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I giving this to Dave, I never seen both these flips before but I thought Dave was worded better n got right to the point.. shit was cool.. I thought UNFUK had the more creative bar but the delivery didn’t pack as much sting.. def not a bad bar at all just got a little choppy.. VOTE DAVE

[Slayerr.]

Two fresh concepts and both were pretty dope, I feel like Dave could’ve execute his a bit harsher. I’m glad unfuk posted the explanation coz I’ve got no idea what za is haha but the arm or dill ozs was sick, felt the connection with amradillo could’ve been a little less forced but honestly so much dope shit going on in the bar outside that

V/unfuk

[MV]

V/Unfuk
I liked meddle in my business, but thr wording is a bit off and reads like you are going to hang a medal from a medal. I think I would have over looks that if his opponent didn’t come with as strong of a bar as he did. I think the wording worked extremely well for Unf. Solid with. Good wordplay . Great battle fellas

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unfuk wins 4-2