Regular Battle
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @mv
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @mv
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no flinches, when you see the Loiusville coming to knock off ya cheap lash extension
please bare witness, normally I wouldn't bat an eye so I don't want your bitch ass to miss this
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im new here so i peeped old battles just to figure the tiers out
immediately felt M pathetic and sensed the whole site felt that for years now
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no flinches, when you see the Loiusville coming to knock off ya cheap lash extension
please bare witness, normally I wouldn't bat an eye so I don't want your bitch ass to miss this
MV you should really proofread before you post. (also a bad habit of mine)
This was very wordy MV. The Louisville slugger line was okay with the tie ins to womanism IE lashe.
The bat an eye word play was pretty good
all in all it was an okay line but the ending could of been better than just calling him a bitch.
im new here so i peeped old battles just to figure the tiers out
immediately felt M pathetic and sensed the whole site felt that for years now
The empathetic / M pathetic entendre was clear technical damage
Bare Ryu gets my vote for less filler and slightly better word play.
It might have even received better if unfuk didnt just use an emphasize one.
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MV, overall decent bar but I have to knock some points for not rhyming and also bat an eye is a played concept I've seen used before.
Ryu I have no complaints. Dope nameplay and good punch. Good stuff
v/ryu
However, there is something missing. Allow me to rectify with The Missing Bar.
These votes are premature like the nuts these two should have been
So this nonsense could be gone like the fuck that I couldn't give.
What is high- My battle loss record & my blood pressure.
What's not high- my win record or me.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Both lines were good here felt one just had a slightly more creative approach props to both here
V/ BARE RYE
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