32 lines max
Topical battle, open subject and no dissing
Official deadline is Tuesday, but you can take as much time as you need.
Let’s go!
Jack Hallows
MC Shtil
32 lines max
Topical battle, open subject and no dissing
Official deadline is Tuesday, but you can take as much time as you need.
Let’s go!
cool, check.
M³
hey Shtil, i should be done with my verse today but i think i may need a line extension lol… the theme i wrote for seems to have carried my verse longer than intended.. i’m not sure how many lines i’m going over but i’m literally at 32 right now after trimming some fat but i know i need a few more bars to complete the story. how would you like to do this? i apologize for any inconvenience.. if you’d like me to just drop it as is i’ll be cool with that too just to keep the line limit respected.
M³
Sup
Brother, of course drop your whole text, it’s much more interesting to read it like it was and not just a part of it.
And yeah, can you do me a favour then? I’ve got some unexpected stuff rushed into me, and I would be really really pleased if I could finish my text until tomorrow. Thank you in advance
(if you don’t mind of course).
And drop your whole fucking bomb here))
haaaa nice! yeah man take your time. i’ll drop as soon as i’m finished.
M³
This year will finish whole in tears and blood.
And we continue to make guns, fun, love.
And what should you do if you’re here but those you love are dead
Or there, in “that one” country, which is next to you? Sand
Flyin’ after the “bang”, tanks leave blanks in places of trees, towns. Sad?
Who the fuck cares? Or if you are, you’d be left in prison for years. Scammed?
No, just your penny enters the pocket of one person
Who spends it on his needs, killing people, while other stupid morons
Watch propaganda on TV while I watch a film on CD:
Mines blowin’, houses bornin’ like a sun, turning
Red slowly like fury of the soldiers, talkin’
‘Bout how they hate this war of minds above,
“Fuck this war, we’re made for them to die, enough!”
People = shit, and that’s not a Slipknot’s song.
The governments’ve been counting this as a law from a long time ago.
You think that having humanity is only reliable for Sardon?
He has never watched shit. I’ve done.
War is a canvas, painted in red,
While the puppeteers dance, we’re left for dead.
Humanity’s pulse in a battle for peace,
But the silence grows louder, begging for release.
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