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    Post Autumn

    The spring fell almost delicate
    in a delicatessen im sweaten endorphins so average
    this weather is meant for no man..
    one second hot the next a blizzard you cant stand
    i project through the projects, the meat markets and grasp
    on to the future of being a man with many mask - many scars
    the sound of option
    the unmounting undebt from being up to date with what cost is
    im coasting floating off fair trades latest juniper berry..
    free tethering between the scenes unearth within the sea breeze marry

    i am where i am meant to be in past time on the pasture
    i wish i wish that i could still be sharing this with my father

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    Re: Post Autumn

    I lost my dad too… sucks!!! Nice write though
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    As much as I hallucinate and see him…
    I’m willing to take that chance

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    Re: Post Autumn

    thanks love your avy

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    Re: Post Autumn

    cool little drop here. Nice how you attached the gloomy mood of the weather to loss of your father. kudos

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    Re: Post Autumn

    thanks

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    Re: Post Autumn

    Nicely smooth
    the flow is tight
    bringing back Positive vibes
    Rhyming ending Scheme

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    Re: Post Autumn

    Love you

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