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    The 2 blind guns of GOD

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    A punchline hits like a sub-contractor retracted
    an infraction backed down in hit until spastic
    classic, pragmatic near synthetic serges purging
    through worship for courtship such horseshit purchased
    parsnips and turnips turtles and wordsmith
    a smith and western like an Indian injured cursing
    perfect placebo toe tags and crossbows, bows an curtseys
    each person sorted by hand to purse organisation personal
    practice x ten all thumbs a bambi tonging around thumpers
    dummy guns and plastic explosive - humming

    what do you know about family values
    solidified in solitude - statues
    attitude raw.. poorpers and caution casual

    if only i out grew what i knew each annual..
    bank

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    Re: The 2 blind guns of GOD

    it was ok, I felt in places the flow was slightly off, and why is it so many people on this site write such short pieces
    it ended to quick

    what do you know about family values
    solidified in solitude - statues
    attitude raw.. poorpers and caution casual
    prob my favorate bit

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    Re: The 2 blind guns of GOD

    this shit was dope. reminds me of one of those obscure in-between tracks on an album that has a spacey boom bap type beat that matches the off kilter lyrics & it’s just a verse & a bridge so you play on repeat for like 4-5 lol.

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    Re: The 2 blind guns of GOD

    thanks guys much appreciated

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